Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
Percy taking a longer nickname was funny.
What was the bit about shrimp? Sounds a bit like something out of the Hitchhikers' Guide.
It was from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, although, I can see where you get the Hitchhiker's Guide thing. Hitchhiker's guide doesn't have alternate realities, though.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
While “reality with shrimp” made me giggle my head off (I’m guessing it’s a Buffy reference and that you’re a BtVS fan too), I have to mention “Mom” slipped in again and for some strange reason you have “Author” for “Arthur”.
you forgot to say harry lives on earth!
That is what I meant by "Terra".
Please, if you dislike my writing as much as you obviously do, do not read it. If you feel compelled to read it, don't try to make my life bleaker by sharing your thoughts on the matter.
I like constructive criticism, but what you have been giving me attacks the bones of the story. If you can't agree with the bones of a story, there is no basis for enjoyment. Constructive
criticism starts with agreeing with the framework of the story and helping to build a better story from it. I will not change my work as fundementally as you have stated the necessity for, in a
large part because of my not agreeing with your statements. View this as an oportunity to spend your time on presuits that will bring you more enjoyment and me less frustration.
I invite you to write the perfect Harry Potter FanFiction, as I, obviously, have not.
That was a great chapter. i like the bit about Harry and Ginny talking with just their eyes. :)
This was hysterical:
"Fred and George looked like innocent angels. Of course the magically conjured halos were a bit over the top."
Your complications of Harry's majority are fascinating. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Cheers!
I have enjoyed the story to this point. Interesting idea for Harry to become an adult. It somewhat boggles the mind, since all of the adults in his life have not really measured up - maybe Arthur
and Molly being the exception.
Thanks for posting the story.
O, how sweet! Non-verbal communication already!? AWW!
Reality with shrimp!
*rolls around laughing*
good chapter update soon
Interesting chapter. I wonder what instructions the Lily and James left for harry.
'Mione
eh, a system of justice where they keep springing surprises on Harry, while he doesn't have an advocate seems rather wrong in my eyes (okay the are not bad surprises but seriously...)
The Ministry actually *admits* they stuffed up, and stuffed up badly, and emancipated Harry. (And no resistance from Dumbledore, either.) Good on Harry.
OH! An inheritance!
Very good.
gunny