Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
By Musings of Apathy
Reviews
KenF posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 9:56pm for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
Good advice on girls on Harry's part... I guess hanging around Hermione for so long may have rubbed off a bit.
I really liked the way that Harry tried to give Crabbe and Goyle a chance to back off. I'm not sure if it's exactly in character, but maybe Harry is growing up.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 21st March 2006 2:46am for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
You wrote Harry giving Ron advice about his love life very well. Your Harry gave it likie a sixteen year old would, and yet it was good advice.
Tonks as DADA prof is always a fun idea.
Can't wait.
snapemustdie9008 posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 11:24pm for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
absolutely wonderful
Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 11:01pm for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
{Pouts}
no fair, thats a cliffy that is!
Loved the bit with ron and all the larger words, but I do have a question. Why the sword if harry was going to try for an exoscism?
Keep up the excellent work, I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter
Musings of Apathy replied:
Rosary beads for an exorscism and a sword in case of apocalypse.
Thanks for reviewing.
Mike.
freakyfinger posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 9:56pm for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
So what exactly were they looking at when they all go into Hogwarts?
Musings of Apathy replied:
The crest in the entrance hall.
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 7:07pm for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
A most awesome chapter. i had completly forgotten about the crests. i think Harry should add them to the outdoor classes, maybe even to the entrance gate and the quidditch pitch ... but then again, the students may get a bad case of lazy if they have a choice not to actually walk anywhere. keep up the good work.
'Mione
Musings of Apathy replied:
As far as the rest of the students know, they are just decoration.
Thanks for reviewing.
Mike.
AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 6:08pm for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
good chapter update soon
ridmania posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 12:53pm for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
awesome lile always!!!!
Terry Swain posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 12:42pm for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
Great chapter. :)
David Thacker posted a comment on Monday 20th March 2006 12:13pm for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express
Two things the frist is some stories seem difrent(spelling?) if they are on two or more sites{i.e longer chapters on some}.The Second thing is I love the creast idea alot.
Musings of Apathy replied:
Yes, this si the Re-Edited/Re-Written and Beta'd version. I have added scenes and changed wording to make the story more readable and improve it overall. I decided, when I was invited to join this site, that it deserved a more refined story.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 16th August 2006 11:51am for Chapter 16: Hogwarts Express