Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
Good advice on girls on Harry's part... I guess hanging around Hermione for so long may have rubbed off a bit.
I really liked the way that Harry tried to give Crabbe and Goyle a chance to back off. I'm not sure if it's exactly in character, but maybe Harry is growing up.
You wrote Harry giving Ron advice about his love life very well. Your Harry gave it likie a sixteen year old would, and yet it was good advice.
Tonks as DADA prof is always a fun idea.
Can't wait.
absolutely wonderful
{Pouts}
no fair, thats a cliffy that is!
Loved the bit with ron and all the larger words, but I do have a question. Why the sword if harry was going to try for an exoscism?
Keep up the excellent work, I am eagerly awaiting your next chapter
Rosary beads for an exorscism and a sword in case of apocalypse.
Thanks for reviewing.
Mike.
So what exactly were they looking at when they all go into Hogwarts?
The crest in the entrance hall.
A most awesome chapter. i had completly forgotten about the crests. i think Harry should add them to the outdoor classes, maybe even to the entrance gate and the quidditch pitch ... but then
again, the students may get a bad case of lazy if they have a choice not to actually walk anywhere. keep up the good work.
'Mione
As far as the rest of the students know, they are just decoration.
Thanks for reviewing.
Mike.
good chapter update soon
awesome lile always!!!!
Great chapter. :)
Two things the frist is some stories seem difrent(spelling?) if they are on two or more sites{i.e longer chapters on some}.The Second thing is I love the creast idea alot.
Yes, this si the Re-Edited/Re-Written and Beta'd version. I have added scenes and changed wording to make the story more readable and improve it overall. I decided, when I was invited
to join this site, that it deserved a more refined story.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Good one.
gunny