Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
Oh, and I liked the description of how D spent his morning too.
I liked the idea of the tour as a way to help incoming students. Using it to show Dumbledore a lesson was a pretty good bonus, though.
Adored the line “Anyway, our illustrious Headmaster spent his morning talking to a spontaneous combustion-prone peacock and a millennia old castle.” Loved Harry's reasoning too.
Fascinating take on the whole Dumbledore/Harry confrontation. Yours is a kinder gentler Harry. Rather unique.
Very positive Harry tack.
Fantastic chapter. I love how you handled them explaining things lovingly to Dumbledore.
This is an interesting twist. A Harry that isn't mad about Dumbledore's influence on his past . . .
It's been done and I wanted to address the issue honestly and then step away. If Harry were mad and not understanding, that would be the plot.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Ah, very interesting...Keep up the good work!
Good chapter.
Wonderful! The tour and luncheon was an awesome idea. And making it seem like it was Dumbledor's idea was genius. Keep up the good work
'Mione
Thanks. It seemed to me that every school has some sort of freshman orientation to let the students know where the classes are and how to get there. Harry and Ginny just used it as a
way to introduce the students to the school without the house barriers.
Interesting, Interesting....
For a moment I had thought that this was one of the functions of that runes that Harry had kept for himself... Does this mean that harry knows the school is sentient?
just a quick review.
That last line... those words need the ominous "Dum Dum DUuuuuuuummmm!!!!" at the end of them. Heh
Good work. Liked the chair bit. Nice touch.
Great chapter!
Very good.
gunny