Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
A most tasty chapter. Ron's blowup was hilarious, the date was delishious, and we get to see a bit of Head-Boy-in-All-But-Name Harry.
Hysterical - a author of a book on Numerology/Arithmancy by the name of 'von Toothree.' Oh, clever indeed.
You've made Harry quite the romantic. Ron is unfortunately still Ron in all his dense glory.
Great read.
Ron is a character that I tend to love and hate for the same reason. I love how dense he is, but I hate how he is not worthy of Hermione when he is like that. My solution was to have
him slowly change. The fact that he is a supporting character gave me the patience to wait for the slow change, something I could not do on Harry. I leave that for the better
writers.
good chapter update soon
A very good chapter. I like the way Harry put Draco down in the defense club. I really like the image of Harry in a suit and Ginny in a "little red dress"! Ron's response is classic. I thought Harry handled it beautifully. It's nice to see Harry helping others. Thank you for writing. pms
Thank you. I had to come up with a way for the club to be open without infiltration of the worse elements. Thank you for appreciating the method that I used.
I'm enjoying re-reading this over here. I can't say that I've really noticed any big changes, but it's been a while since I read the beginning of this story.
I'm looking forward to more, thanks for sharing it.
No big changes were meant. A couple of small scenes were added, but nothing earth shattering. I am glad that you have come back for my story, again. Thank you for reading and
reviewing.
*Sigh* Don't you just love to make fun of all the cheesy pick-up lines?
Of course. They are so camp that they might work again in the right setting.
Well, maybe not.
Yes a most intresting chapter indeed my friend hope to see more of this wonderful story
Oh *waves to 'Mione ;)
Awesome chapters. The pick up lines were a hoot. Keep up the good work.
'Mione
Sometimes my muse is particularly kind. Sometimes she is plain nasty.
Hmm... nice chapter, Interesting scene with Ginny's 'Little red dress' and the bad pickup lines. I think harry's explaination needs to be read to most younger sisters however... (Most of us older
brothers too, It's damn hard seeing them grow up like that.)
Great chapter, Keep up the excellent work!
It is what Ginny needed to hear for her to not go to war with Ron. They both mean someting special to Harry.
Lol Von too three :) hehehe... poor guy imagine having a name like that!
That is as good as I get for JKR's penchant for names verses profession or books they wrote. Thank you for reviewing.


Very good.
gunny