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Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir

By Musings of Apathy

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Name: TxA_GunFighter
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Thursday 17th August 2006 2:59am

Very good.

gunny

Name: KenF
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Sunday 23rd July 2006 3:21am

A most tasty chapter. Ron's blowup was hilarious, the date was delishious, and we get to see a bit of Head-Boy-in-All-But-Name Harry.

Name: Aaran St Vines
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Tuesday 28th March 2006 10:49pm

Hysterical - a author of a book on Numerology/Arithmancy by the name of 'von Toothree.' Oh, clever indeed.

You've made Harry quite the romantic. Ron is unfortunately still Ron in all his dense glory.

Great read.

Reply from: Musings of Apathy

Ron is a character that I tend to love and hate for the same reason.  I love how dense he is, but I hate how he is not worthy of Hermione when he is like that.  My solution was to have him slowly change.  The fact that he is a supporting character gave me the patience to wait for the slow change, something I could not do on Harry.  I leave that for the better writers.

Name: nandhp
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Tuesday 28th March 2006 4:37pm

good chapter update soon

Name: Patches
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Tuesday 28th March 2006 2:23pm

A very good chapter. I like the way Harry put Draco down in the defense club. I really like the image of Harry in a suit and Ginny in a "little red dress"! Ron's response is classic. I thought Harry handled it beautifully. It's nice to see Harry helping others. Thank you for writing. pms

Reply from: Musings of Apathy

Thank you.  I had to come up with a way for the club to be open without infiltration of the worse elements.  Thank you for appreciating the method that I used.

Name: Jim_xinu
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Tuesday 28th March 2006 11:41am

I'm enjoying re-reading this over here. I can't say that I've really noticed any big changes, but it's been a while since I read the beginning of this story.

I'm looking forward to more, thanks for sharing it.

Reply from: Musings of Apathy

No big changes were meant.  A couple of small scenes were added, but nothing earth shattering.  I am glad that you have come back for my story, again.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Name: freakyfinger
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Tuesday 28th March 2006 10:43am

*Sigh* Don't you just love to make fun of all the cheesy pick-up lines?

Reply from: Musings of Apathy

Of course.  They are so camp that they might work again in the right setting.

Well, maybe not.

Name: Charles Slone
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Tuesday 28th March 2006 9:42am

Yes a most intresting chapter indeed my friend hope to see more of this wonderful story

Oh *waves to 'Mione ;)

Name: HermioneGreen
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Tuesday 28th March 2006 9:27am

Awesome chapters. The pick up lines were a hoot. Keep up the good work.

'Mione

Reply from: Musings of Apathy

Sometimes my muse is particularly kind.  Sometimes she is plain nasty.

Name: Manatheron
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Tuesday 28th March 2006 9:01am

Hmm... nice chapter, Interesting scene with Ginny's 'Little red dress' and the bad pickup lines. I think harry's explaination needs to be read to most younger sisters however... (Most of us older brothers too, It's damn hard seeing them grow up like that.)

Great chapter, Keep up the excellent work!

Reply from: Musings of Apathy

It is what Ginny needed to hear for her to not go to war with Ron.  They both mean someting special to Harry.

Name: AK
Chapter: Chapter 21: Dancing and Defense
Posted On: Tuesday 28th March 2006 8:59am

Lol Von too three :) hehehe... poor guy imagine having a name like that!

Reply from: Musings of Apathy

That is as good as I get for JKR's penchant for names verses profession or books they wrote.  Thank you for reviewing.

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