Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir

That was outstanding. Nicely done.

gunny

Decent prank on Ron's part. The various self-talks you showed us were the real laugh, though.

Boy, it took a LOT of chutzpah for Harry to just walk back to his table like that.

“Half-blood ponce dark lord” was such a good description. I loved Ron having a fit at Ginny showing her knees. “Mommy want” is a perfect joke except it should be “Mummy” or maybe “Momma”. Harry's actions were perfect.

Great chapter :)

Oh Great prank and what a turn around for The Prakster! Very classy. Thanks for writing this one! pms

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I'm enjoying your story a lot. I'm in Iraq right now, and because I have to pay for interent time, I just copy the story down chapter by chapter onto a flash drive in Microsoft Word Format and read it on one of the computers in my room. I can't wait to read more.

I am glad to hear that there is a way to retrieve stories for reading.  I am also glad that you are enjoying my story.  Thank you for reading and taking the time to review.

Very fun!

good chapter update soon

I wish I could get that kind of reaction from at least one girl . . . . my age that is . . . getting that reaction from a friend's mum would be downright scary . . .

Most fanfiction doesn't make Ron into an independent prankster, if he is a prankster at all. Yours does so. Harry's reaction to his prank was choice, delicious, and a wonderful revenge up to this point.

However, whatever the revenge Harry and Ginny will let slip on the brothers, continues to escalate in forcefulness as you develop this tale.

You are building towards a monumental explosion.

Can't wait.

Someday, when I get to the revenge chapter, I will have to flesh it out a bit, but yes, come the holidays there will be an answer.

Classic!!!! Wonderful!!!! And I loved Harry's reaction. Keep up the good work.

'Mione

hehehe stupid ron....gawd knows i hate him.
ugly.
silly.
daft ron.
good job.
p.s what does hermoine see in him?

Nice, love the story was reading it on Fanfiction and was wondering where it went. And so it Accends into the hall of the gods of Fanfiction.

Thank you for following me to this site.

"And so it Accends into the hall of the gods of Fanfiction."

That seems like an accurate paraphrase of my reaction when I received an e-mail from Tim Joy inviting me to join the site.  I had to answer him with concern that I was not prolific enough to join.  I studiously did not mention that I didn't consider myself good enough for this group of authors, trying not to look a gift horse in the mouth.  Tim answered that they valued quality over quantity, and so here I am.  I decided instantly that I wanted to make this story worthy of the company, or as close to as I could.  That is why I am in a re-write/re-edit with some great Beta's helping me out.  It has been a good experience.