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Dragen posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 7:37pm for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

Another great chapter mate, I do love how the story is going and the planks that are being pulled, I think that this one is the worst. Being given 'the talk' by McGonagall and Madame Pomfrey, how evil of Grorge.

dzio posted a comment on Saturday 11th August 2007 7:15am for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

Dear Merlin on a broomstick... :D

This was Classic! The Talk was the single most hilarious prank I've ever seen in any fanfic! If I had the authority to do it, I would give you the badge of a honorary Marauder and quite possibly the Order of Merlin, First Class! Brilliant job! I laughed so hard my stomach still hurts after ten minutes! And I'm seriously overusing exclamation marks now. See what you made me do?

:D

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 17th August 2006 3:56am for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

That was brilliant, gotta love the Twins.

gunny

KenF posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 2:45am for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

Yes, George's pranks have turned truly evil. This is the best prank yet.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 5:15am for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

That was definitely the best prank so far. You had me nearly falling off my chair when I got to the bit about the pictures moving. Poor Harry!

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 6th April 2006 11:13pm for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

Awesome chapter . . . fantasmmic prank . . . I look forward to more

'Mione

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 6th April 2006 6:36pm for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

Excellent chapter. What a great prank. Only Gred and Forge could come up with this one! Harry had to have "the talk" with McGonagal AND Pomphrey"!?! Terrific. That was cool about Harry and Ginny having a talk afterward! Very well done! I surprised there was nothing about Mr. & Mrs. Weasley except for the reference to Ginny getting the talk from her mum! Thanks for writing. I really like this one, a lot! pms

freakyfinger posted a comment on Thursday 6th April 2006 8:52am for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

I don't know why ginny is freaking out at the end. I thought it'd have been obvious that Harry wanted to have a long relationship with her.

Musings of Apathy replied:

She isn't freaking out in a bad way, just in a shocked, happy way. It took her that to process what he wanted and meant. In the end, she decided that she might just have to change his mind on how limited their time together would be.

Aberbadger posted a comment on Wednesday 5th April 2006 10:51pm for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

I've said it before, and I'll say it again...
GEORG SHOULD BE DQd!!!!

Musings of Apathy replied:

Thanks.   I agree that it was a bit traumatic, but Harry will recover...eventually.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 5th April 2006 8:58pm for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

I cannot imagine what prank could top this one. "The Talk" with McGonagall and Pomfrey - even I am blushing at the thought.

There's not enough 'waiting for marriage' in fanfiction.

My applauds.

amulder posted a comment on Wednesday 5th April 2006 6:56pm for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

There are about five uses of the word "shutter" or "shuttered" in this chapter. I think you might want to check the dictionary... A Shutter is a "A hinged cover or screen for a window, usually fitted with louvers."

I think you are probably looking for the word "Shudder", that is "To shiver convulsively, as from fear or revulsion."

That said, having read this also on ff.net I have to agree that getting "The Talk" from Minny and Poppy has got to be the worst possible thing for a young man to endure. I think I'll do a little shuddering myself.

And I also congratulate you on that great line "no hanky, and certainly no panky". That is a laugh-out-loud line if I ever saw one.

thanks

Musings of Apathy replied:

That was very helpful.   I have made the changes in both the site and on my Hard Drive.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Mike.

lee posted a comment on Wednesday 5th April 2006 5:31pm for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

Why are you merely putting up chapters that are already at FF.net? There isn't any new chapters.

Musings of Apathy replied:

There are no new chapters because, after FF.n deleted me, I was invited here and I decided to do a rewrite and Beta of the story.   When I finish the previously posted chapters, I will continue my writing of new chapters, not before.

AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Wednesday 5th April 2006 4:09pm for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

good chapter update soon

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Wednesday 5th April 2006 12:13pm for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

Wow. OK, now I have one word for you. UPDATE This is a great story.

Musings of Apathy replied:

What an interesting combination of character names to make up your alias.   Are they your favorite characters or is there a deeper story?

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Wednesday 5th April 2006 11:14am for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

nice chapter - the transitions between the scenes worked particularly well - especially the one from the hospital wing to the terrible twins talking with Pr. G

nice work

Musings of Apathy replied:

Let me introduce everyone to one of my invaluable Betas.   Everyone this is Ken Warner, AKA Sparky40sw, one of the people responsible for making this a better story.   You can see his monicker, along with Donalddeutsch, Cateagle and occasionally my Britpicker; Kat Armstrong, at the top of each chapter for helping out.   Let's all offer them a round of applause for the wonderful suggestions they have offered throughout this story to date.

Thanks, Ken, for the suggestion that the transition needed to be smoothed.   It did make the chapter markedly better.   I would have never guessed that you would come to this site to read the story after Betaing it for me.   Thanks for the review.

nuttyal34 posted a comment on Wednesday 5th April 2006 10:24am for Chapter 24: George ’s Prank

I really love this prnak best when that chapter was on ff.net I know that your were ahead of this chapter when the bastards took it off!

Musings of Apathy replied:

Yes, I was all the way to Christmas, but now I hope that it is getting a little better.