Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
Very good.
gunny
The lakeside conversation was fun.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE, keep up the great writing.
MPF
Gods, I love this story - and the frequent updates. I have to apologize for being such a lousy reviewer, but I'll try to improve... Hermione just noticed something, but are H&G ready for her
to find out?
I sure love your powerful Harry, and the explanation is just great, and highly plausible in the magical world.
Thanks for sharing!
You have been a fine reviewer, even if you do not for every chapter. Thank you for the effort. The frequent chapters should last until I post chapter 41, the last one posted before the
big change of sites. Chapter 42 has been languishing half-finished while I did the rewrite edit and Beta process.
I am glad that you find my method of a powerful Harry believable. When nurturing the plot bunnies that made this story up, I had to be cautious of not making him so powerful that it killedd all
of the plot. I have read too many superpower Harry stories that have made me ask by chapter 4 why Harry had not already gone and wiped Voldemort from the face of the earth, as it is obvious
that he will have no problem. Without adversity and chalanges, there is no plot, and my story is lean enough on plot as it is.
good chapter update soon
I had wondered if Hermione would catch on about the portals ahead of the curve.
Interesting chappie.
Keep wondering. Hermione certainly will.
Wonderful chapter . . . how much longer till Hermione figures it out? She's not the smartest witch in her year for nothing . . . I look forward to more.
'Mione
How much longer, indeed. She does not have all of the evidence, yet.
Telling a girlfriend that they are 'just seeing things' is never something you want to do if you want to stay on their good side . . . .
I should know . . . .
Thanks for the review.
Ron was never known as the sharpest needle in the box. Luckily for him, Hermione's tollerance is based on who she knows him to be, not some idealized version of who he will become.
Hmmm...maybe I should add that somewhere.
Mike.
so when are you going to put up the rest of the chapters to 41? and put up a few new ones! i love the story dont get me wrong! i am just going into withdrawl! keep up the fantastic writing!
Thank you for reviewing. I am affraid that I find it impossible to write the latest chapter (chapter 42) while I am rewriting the earlier chapters. What I am doing now involves reading
and correcting my chapters, essentially a rewrite, and then sending them off to my wonderful Betas. That is the difference. Now I have a trusted group of people to Beta my work, and it is
making a difference. It's subtle, but it is there. I hope that you will stick with me until I reach chapter 41 and then with me as I struggle through writing the new chapters.
Just a heartless tease, but I have three or so chapters written that I am trying to lead up to that consist of the second quidditch match and the aftermath. No more spoilers than that.
Mike.
Great chapter. :)
Very good.
gunny