Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
The house elves' pep talk was a neat idea, especially the way they think of Mrs Weasley as a true hero.
Halloween is supposed to be scary, right? I wonder how many of the students will appreciate Harry's little joke.
As much as I love Harry's prank on the entire school, I love the House Elves even more. Absolutely brilliant.
What a great way to introduce a Halloween Ball!
That was a great entrance for the archway. It was really dramatic. That was great when they couldn't exit the ball thru the arch and then the mytifying voice made it even more creepy! Now on to the
ball! Thanks, pms
Oh, what a splendid way to start a Halloween party! They sure won't forget this, ever. And now more than anytime before I want the next chapter up soon (meaning 2 seconds ago), because I want to
see the students' reactions to Harry's work with the chamber. Oh, how I would've loved to be at that party!
Nice touch with the house-elf pep-talk. Now we know how they do it...
Love it!
Thank you. You'll probably get this response after you have read chapter 28, so I hope that it is to your liking. The thing to remember about the party, though, is that most people
don't know that he was the one to make the changes or to decorate. While they heard it, it would not have sunk in.
that's so funny, i could just hear the evil muhwhaha laughter echoing around!
That is just cruel, Evil, mean spirited, resoundingly nasty, and socailly reprehensible...
{Falls to knees}
Teach me?
^.^
Excellent chapter! The illusion which hides the transformation is a stunning Illistration of why I love this Fic! The Booming voice talking about Only six ever getting out alive was a stroke of sheer
genius! What an evil place to stop {Makes mental note} The timing is perfect!
Keep up the outstanding work!
You do flatter me.
Now kiss my toes.
Some things just fall into place and seem like the most natural thing when you are writing and feeling it. This was one of those chapter endings.
Malfizzy... a House Elf-ification of Malfoy? Wouldn't surprise me...
The six:
Harry, Ginny, Dumbledore, McGonnagal, Riddle...
Can't remember another, unless Ron counts, and if that were the case, so would Lockhart. Dobby?
Think carefully. Really carefully. There was another.
I'll post the next chapter Friday so you can see for yourself.
That was just mean!
So Harry is pranking the entire school?? Ah well, when you have the power, might as well use it. I love the house elf scene!!! "Whoever gets Master Weezy’s table, remember who you is serving and give him more."
Thank you. And it didn't take all of that much power, just creativity and time to set up all of the magic before hand.
The pep talk by the house-elf commandant was a brilliant piece of writing. Just excellent. To make Molly Weasley one for house-elves to revere as a great hostess was most clever.
I had a feeling Harry couldn't resist using the start of this ball as a way to prank everyone. I felt sure he would let all first see the chamber as it had been before his clean-up.
But the booming voice about those who had gone before - terrific!
Thank you. I felt that soem behind the scenes was appropriate and original. I figure, with all of the stories that I have read, if I haven't read it, it's original enough.
Sometimes you just can't let anyone with Marauder blood loose to organize anything.
lol aweosme chapter and prank by harry and ginny!!!
Dude, I just loved the House-Elf motivational speech, great stuff. I do have one question though...the Dark Lord Malfizzy?...Sounds like an aristocratic gangter rapper. Great Chapter.
Thank you for the review. The Dark Lord Malfizzy...you have to remember, this is in House Elf Speak...and why can't we have had a Dark Lord Malfizzy, if we can have a rediculous name such as Dark Lord Voldemort.
lol, that's so April Fool's... Even though it's the Halloween ball. Cheers.
-The Lost
A most awesome ending to a wonderful chapter . . . I look forward to seeing where the numbers came from
'Mione
Oh, good Halloweeen prank on the poor kids!
I absolutely loved the house elf pep talk. Great fun!!!
Harry is such a meany! Scaring little firsties and seconds like that! ha ha ha ha
Very good. Love the part about Molly.
gunny