Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
I meant to say that I liked having Harry dance with Hermione.
I need a beta for my reviews...
Ginny showed remarkable restraint in dealling with Malfoy. If I'd been on the scene, there would probably been some damage to the caves. Reductor curses are messy that way...
Damned impressive spell work on Miss Weasley's part. Hitting Malfoy 3 times (stunner, binder, and sticking spell) while in the air involved some rather rapid casting. Remind me to stay on her good
side.
Draco should be turned into a mouse and given to Crookshanks. Or maybe a rat... Crookie could play with him longer that way.
I liked you having Harry dance with Ginny too. Not many fics have couples mixing, and it is one of the true pleasures of a formal dance.
Poor Many. Great chapter. BTW, no candy corn in the UK - sorry, I like the stuff too but we just can't buy it over here. Smarties or M&Ms might be a good replacement sweet.
Oh, Malfoy, you are gonna get it....DIE MALFOY
Oh... I hope malfoy gets expelled for this one, sexual assult is one of the VILEST things that can be done to a person.
Good chapter. :)
Damn Malfoy . . . always has to ruin everything good . . .
I note that one minor typo - you've got "patrificus" instead of "petrificus" - has carried over from the ff.net version. There is a dictionary floating around of Harry Potter words that you can load into your spell checker. Kokopelli mentioned it a few months ago. I like the bit about the Weasley's teaching their sons to be honarble gentlemen. It really really rings true. From canon, I see the parents as fairly old-fashioned, strict but loving, and all that. thanks for sharing.
Thank you. I am correcting that now. Thank you for the notice. Stupefy was also spelled wrong.
Interesting turn of events, I look forward to seeing Malfoy getting his due . . .
Keep up the good work
w000t i suppose the good thing about checking your site every 2 seconds is that iget first review hehehe i thought it was good and i hope that dumbledore does not let draco off AGAIN LIKE ALWAYS
give him punishment!!!!
awsome writing good work
Very good.
gunny