Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir

What a great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next in the story... keep up the good work.

Good chapter.

gunny

I liked your clay-pot analogy for magic and the way it give different potentials for power and endurance.

Liked the metaphor for magic you used.

Hi
Great story


noticed one small spelling mistake about 3/4 of the way through the chapter though
You know that his school sent a note last year that said that he would have to loose weight because they did not make clothes big enough for him?

Thank you.  I am going through and changing it.

Ch.2 - - Very interesting development. If Harry were a bit more angsty in your fic, he would be upset that he had to 'start all over again.'

He is not angsty in this way, and this will help him advance more quickly and with less distractions of teenaged 'woe is me.'

Yours is a fascinating new concept.

good story. I am looking forward to where it goes. Thank you for writing.
pms

I am glad to see this is being posted here. I was sad to see it taken down over at that other site. Thank you for sharing.

Sue

Great chapter.:)

Very intersting. I am looking forward to how you develope this story. I am constantly amazed byt the creative tallent in the fanfiction authors. Thank you so much for the entertainment you provide.
pms

good stuff keep up the good work