Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
Mandy seems to be dealing with things well. I liked the way you interspersed Malfoy's thoughts with the rest of the story.
And, if Harry would like somebody to take his place at the center of female attention, please have him contact me. (no, I don't have ANY sympathy for him)
Damn Malfoy! I love his discomfort after the slime did what he did. This was a great chapter.
{eyebrow quirks}
Very nice!
I am loving the story ... for a second time. I first came across it on the other site. It is one of my all time favorites, please update soon.
woohoo
can't wait for the next installment!
I love this sweet, thoughtful Harry. But to tell the truth, any man that brings a distressed woman chocolate ice cream is a knight in shining armor! I love what you did to Draco, serves the little
ferret right. And Mandy's necklace is amazing. Great chapter!
Mari :oD
Ah...another person that will appreciate the later chapters. Don't be fooled into thinking that Draco is neutered now. He still has nearly two years of schooling left, but only two
months of restriction. Stay tuned.
Very sweet- even with the ice cream... :P chocolate chip...
Hi -- I just read up to Chapter 30, and so far I love it. Harry and the Headmaster's relationship is great; you haven't smoothed over the Headmaster's mistakes, but I think they both have learned their lesson. Harry has grown up a little fast, but not unbelievably so. Please keep going!
Thank you for joining me with this story. It was previously posted elsewhere through chapter 41, but I am using the oportunity of posting to this select site to do a rewrite and Beta of the
story to hopefully improve it. I am glad that I am finding new readers.
That's the best kind of torture for someone so used to attention: solitary!
Good So Far!
Are you rewriting this story or simply reposting it? I love the story and don't mind rereading it from here, but should I go back to the beginning to read your rewrite?
Thank you for rejoining my story. The story, as posted here, is a minor rewite with a few Betas helping me to polish it up. A few things were fixed and a few scenes added, but nothing
earthshattering. I believe that this is a better version, but I don't know that it is different enough to reread if that thought doesn't grab you. If you fail to reread the whole thing,
you won't be lost, but you might appreciate some of the polishing that we did.
Wonderful chapter . . . I must wonder however, was Draco being serious or desparate?
'Mione
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:) As usual. Just thought I'd say for once even if it's not much use to you other than the stroking of your ego.
Love the story and will be glad when it is back to where it was when taken off of FF. Thanks for writing.
Good one.
gunny