Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
Very good chapter. I do hope the bad guys get their tails handed to them.
gunny
I thought the timing on that alarm call was perfect. Just as Hermione thinks she's going to get answers, BAM!
Pink bunny slippers? Bwahahaha. 500 calories was such a funny touch. Nice twist ending too.
Nice way to protect the Runic Transport System. Good job there!
I really liked Harry's prank. That was very inventive to have it tied to caloric input.
Great chapter.
Lovely chapter, lovely cliffy!
ooh, that was a really nice cliffie!!! harry should leave hermione hangin though-she often does things and won't tell harry and ron reason many times throughout cannon; but alas, i'm a selfish person, so maybe u should go ahead...
is soo cool!
That isn't a very helpful comment and makes me sound like an air head but your story truely is wonderful! Please keep up the good work
I am glad to see the story will soon be in new chapter as I had read up to chapter 41 before FF.net deleted it. Thanks for keeping the story going and I look forward to seeing a new chapter.
This is an excellent chapter. I love the pranks
and Harry's was a wonderful payback. I think it
is great that Harry is going to share his rune
knowledge with Bill and Hermione. Bill is going to get a graphic lesson on Harry's system.
What a wonderful idea that is. I salute your inventive imagination! Thank you for writing.
pms
lol awesome chapter once again, this hermione you've got here is so bloody annoying, i mean just because harry can do so much now doesn't give her the right to get angry or bloody jealous. She's just gotta accept the fact that he will always be better than her. Great writing by the way i like how your setting the story up and can't wait to see what kind of trouble Mr Weasley and Harry get them selves into. GO HARRY
Yay!Almost at the point reached in other sources!
Soon, I hope, there will be chapters not posted anywhere else?
Great story... I love it.
Another great, if short, chapter. Like how Harry got his pranks to be activated by a known Weasley attribute, eating. Interesting that he figured out how to key it to a set number of calories
eaten though. Neat trick.
Boy, being tag-teamed by Hermione and Bill would make anyone give up. Wonder who triggered the necklace. Looking forward to the next installment!
Aaaahh! Cliffie! Ouch, ouch, ouch! It's a good thing you're updating fairly often.
Harry really is a sweet soul. I so understand his wish to be admired by Hermione when she found out about the LRTS, but I seincerely doubt she'll admire him less when she reads his notes. Whenever
that will come to pass. After this thing in Camden, at least.
Naughty author, handing out cliffies like that... but I guess it's fun - isn't it? Be my guest, I find surviving cliffies is a small price to pay for excellent fanfiction.
Thanks for sharing!
I would promise no more cliffies, but, as the author, I actually know what will happen and don't make empty promises.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Awesome chapter . . . horrible way for the chapter to end . . . but a very good chapter none the less . . . I look forward to seeing how long it takes the boys to figure out the prank, and I hope
that they don't accidently ingest something while on the rescue mission which would render them unable to help or protect themselves . . .
Keep up the good work . . .
'Mione
At first the return prank seemed a little standard, but linking it to 500 calorie intake and random animal transfigurations made it above standard.
The Runes explanation for the new transportation method was interesting. I appreciate that Harry wants to keep it out of the lofty intellectual reaches.
Then you dump an evil cliffy on us. Well done. Can't wait.
Was Bill the change I thought he went with Mooney, when he went to save the DA member. But I could be wrong. Great chapter by the way.
MPF
intresting, wonder who's in trouble?
Hmmm, you appear to be petering off in update rates. I assume it's because that, now you're near where you were on SIYE, you're writing more new stuff rather than just editing?
Yes. I have chapter 42 (the never before seen chapter) almost ready for the Betas. With new chapters, bon't expect updates as often. Thank you for reading.
Great chapter.


Noel=french boy's name pronounced Nole
Noelle= french girl's name pronounced No-elle; also means Christmas
"Noel" was the same as used to refer to a Christmas episode on 'The West Wing'. Refering to Wikipedia, the primary definition of "Noel" refers to Christmas Celebration. I will stick with my spelling, but thank you for having enough interest in my story to correct something that you felt was wrong.
Mike (MoA)