Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
By Musings of Apathy
Good chapter. I bet there is some fireworks when they surprise Harry.
gunny
I realize you probably don't care, but at one point you say 'The entire crest and some individual elements inside were bordered in pure twenty-four carat gold.' Just so you know the word carat describes the mass of a gem, and the word karat describes the purity of gold. You may (or may not) want to correct that.
Actually, I do care. I have changed it on this site.
Thank you for helping out.
Mike (MoA)
The crests are a pretty cool idea.
Why do I have the feeling that surprising Harry is not a good idea?
Your fabrication of the stone transportation system at Hogwarts is fascinating and most clever.
Bravo.
I like this story. I get the feeling that Dumbledore is going to get a "surprise" when they try to surprise Harry! I hope everyone is ok after Harry's reaction! Please keep up the good work. I
didn't have time to read and review each chapter but I liked them all. Thank you for writing. Please continue.
pms
Awesome story so far. I look forward to more.
'Mione
Oh, sounds like Harry's gonna be jumpy! Nice work!
good chapter, update soon
awesome!!!!!
What a fool Dumbledore is, I don't think Harry will react will to this surprise at all... keep up the great work.