Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir

Outstanding, like it more and more.

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Good prank on Ron and Hermione, and the initiation sounds like sport.

Tiny Brit pick moment: no Brit would ever say, as Hermione does, "he sure is" it's just an Americanism. Otherwise loved Ginny's clever hex and the pranking idea.

Thanks.  I changed it to "Yes, he is,"

Thank you for the review.

How would ron know what a car was?(10th paragraph from the bottom).
Didn't harry have a b-day party at grimauld place, before 5th year?
please no more 'family' stuff, it's way too mushy mushy for my tastes(and everyone elses)

In the second year we learned that the Weasley's had a car; a Ford Anglia, which Rona nd Harry end up flying to Hogwarts adn is currently wild in the Forbidden Forest, so Ron knows what a car is.

Harry did not have a birthday party at Grimauld Place because he arrived there on August Sixth, one week after his birthday.

"No more 'family' stuff"...well, I am afraid that this story is written through chapter 41, as has been previously posted on FF.n, and I will not entertain requests to change either my writing style or content.  As far as this being to "mushy mushy" for your tastes "and everyone elses", I am afraid that you can only cast your vote, not everyone else's, and I have received no other review complaining about my "mushy mushy" content.

This is really great so far! I am looking forward to seeing what Harry manages to do when he goes back to school, so please, update soon!

I found you! Yay! :D I don't get ff.net they just keep deleting all the really good fics. I'm so glad that you have found a far better site to post at. You're in fantastic company :D I'm really enjoying re-reading this fic. I didn't think it was needed or possible you have made it better. Looking forward to you getting back to the 40-somethings though.

Thank you for making the trip over here. I am glad that you agree with me about the quality of authors on this site, it is an honor. It will take a while to catch up with where I was, but I hope that the story will be markedly better when we do. I am looking forward to it because I have had the second quidditch match written since before I posted chapter 1 the first time.

Novel idea to go over Harry's background having Ron and Hermione tell the older Weasley boys.

Pranking Harry may not be a good idea. Pranking Ginny's Harry because of Ginny is probably a death wish.

Fun, fun, FUN!

Good chapter. Note: In the very first sentence, the phrase "I mean Fred and George" should be removed. Authorial comments or comments addressed to the reader break the fourth wall and disrupt the narrative.

Thank you for reviewing.

It hadn't occured to me that my cute little thing disrupted the reader's flow, but I can see what you mean. In general I am against AN's so I will correct it.

good chapter update soon