lyric posted a comment on Sunday 27th August 2006 3:36pm for One-Shot

That put a huge smile on my face...especially the end lol Great lil' story there.
-lyric

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Tuesday 15th August 2006 2:00pm for One-Shot

Yeah, nothing to worry about... I mean, its not like they have exchanged rings or anything! Cute, fluffy, and funny... a great combination!

pstibbons posted a comment on Wednesday 9th August 2006 12:34am for One-Shot

In the next chapter, Ron registers his protest at the existence of chapter two...

Amusing, I'll give this one a 6/10. Harry's sensitivity/directness in his message seems most ooc.

Tobang posted a comment on Thursday 3rd August 2006 2:37pm for One-Shot

Well I thought the story was a little to…fast paced, but I found the ending absolutely hilarious.

~Tobang

KenF posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 7:19pm for One-Shot

Oh, that was cute.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 7:00am for One-Shot

That ending was great. I was a little disturbed by how fast she was moving (and I don't mean in terms of the laws of physics) but the final joke was worth the doubts.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 4:01am for One-Shot

very nice - especially the last line - I do love it when there is just one last dig at the unarmed in the battle of wits.

IceBlades posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 12:59am for One-Shot

LOL great lil story.

Ilove the irony of that final conversation with Ron and Hermione.

kuzutsu posted a comment on Sunday 23rd April 2006 11:38pm for One-Shot

Excellent.

UdderPD posted a comment on Wednesday 12th April 2006 11:38pm for One-Shot

That was brilliant, the last line was so Ron.

TTFN UdderPD

Musings of Apathy replied:

Thank you.   Ever since the first draft was written of this story, that has seemed to be the natural stopping point.   Thank you for reading and reviewing.

kuzutsu posted a comment on Thursday 6th April 2006 1:35pm for One-Shot

Cool ending !!!

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 28th March 2006 1:37pm for One-Shot

Perfect! I love the way the story grows and then ends. I just love Ron's acceptance when he figures his little sister is "safe"! A great ending.
Thank you so much for writing. pms

eddie posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 9:38pm for One-Shot

i just read this and it oh yes it defianantly needs thier reactions when they find out she did get her ring. this is done quite well.

jake m posted a comment on Friday 10th March 2006 4:15pm for One-Shot

.......could be longer.
omg i may be getting a rep as a awful commontator as i always say the worst of wat i think first....damit!
well i think twas well written i dont like it when ron gets hermoine but the way u wrote that makes me only slighty insane about it now well done!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Tuesday 7th March 2006 2:49am for One-Shot

LOL!

The Resident posted a comment on Thursday 2nd March 2006 11:09pm for One-Shot

Very cute, especially the last two scenes. Thank you for the smile it brought to my face and my soul. Keep up the excellent work.

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 2nd March 2006 10:21pm for One-Shot

Heh! A rather cute story ... did she ever get around to asking him to the dance? Or did they stay hidden down there for a while?

'Mione

Mariposa posted a comment on Saturday 25th February 2006 12:24pm for One-Shot

Ha!HA! yet so sweet! I cracked up when she asked him to marry her! Great surprise!

freakyfinger posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 11:53am for One-Shot

Oh man, I LOVE the ending!! hehe, 'Nothing to worry about then'. I'm reading this in my computer science class, and I crack up. Everyone started staring at me. Man, it was embarrasing, but it was worth it.

Lira posted a comment on Tuesday 14th February 2006 6:39pm for One-Shot

*chuckles* Nice one!