FeNo posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2012 11:33am

How sneaky that last lines were.

I like it, even when i'm not really feeling like this could be happening in the books. But then the implicit emotions under the story do at least count as much as what was written down, if that does make any sense to you. With the exception of Harry going underground when something as dreadful as up to 140 female students asking for his time and hand would impend of course!

On the other hand your short narration shows exactly why the OBHWF won't work with the characters we see in the books.. as Hermione and Ron act almost irrecognizable and that just ensures they would make a good pair as opposite to their constant fighting in the books.

AllIsFairInLoveAndWar posted a comment on Monday 9th August 2010 11:02am

omg! loved this! sorry that its a one-shot though...

wizmage posted a comment on Saturday 13th February 2010 2:48pm

Nice story, it was quite amusing.

Forever&3moreSeconds posted a comment on Sunday 24th January 2010 5:55pm

nice!... and the inference at the end was intended, I trust? ;p
Ruth.

LKK posted a comment on Thursday 30th October 2008 6:45am

mmm, I give it a five out of ten. It's a little too fast and fluffy for my tastes.

SassyFrass posted a comment on Tuesday 20th May 2008 3:52am

Yay! Sequel please?! (puppy dog eyes)

CodeRomance posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 4:01am

nothing to worry about haa yea right! lol that was great!

CodeRomance

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 8:41am

Mwahahaha. Thats evil!

ily.the.cat posted a comment on Saturday 10th November 2007 3:59am

this is funny. It would also be kinda cool to continue it.

rune1806 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd August 2007 11:50am

well writen and funny, a very enjoyable read.

Jevandodo posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd May 2007 4:39am

Love the ending and the little twists.So cute
JD

juju jula posted a comment on Sunday 29th April 2007 8:06pm

Great story. I especially love Ron's last words

dave gerecke posted a comment on Saturday 17th March 2007 5:27pm

Cute and Ron and Herm are clueless as ever.
dave

Jabe Washburn1 posted a comment on Thursday 15th February 2007 2:06am

That's pretty good. Made me laugh. Very well done.

No Idea Why I Smile posted a comment on Monday 1st January 2007 11:01am

**bursts out laughing**

i read this a while back, on GP, i think it was, and decided to read it again...

and its just as good as i remember it...

i say you should do a sequel to it, showing Ron and Hermione's, not to mention the rest of the school's, reaction to Harry and Ginny not even dating at all before getting engaged...and did they do anything? ;)

that is, you should do the sequel in between writing Family Inseperable and Cracked Resivior...have fun with that!...lol

i still love it...look forward to a sequel if you so choose to do one...

~*NIWIS*~

milk posted a comment on Sunday 10th December 2006 2:56am

0h God. please write a sequel. i woud love to see ron's expression after he finds out what could happen. that was so funny. it made my day today. thank you for that!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CootiePatootie posted a comment on Thursday 30th November 2006 4:40pm

"She seemed awfully passionate about finding him," Ron said, "You don’t suppose that they would do something, you know…rash."

"You mean get intimate?" asked Hermione, "No," she said confidently, "Not before they are at least engaged. She wanted to wait for the ring."

"Oh, okay," Ron said, with relief, "Nothing to worry about then."

The whole thing is almost disgustingly cute, but this made me laugh out loud.

Thanks!

Cheers,

Cassie

LittleTom45 posted a comment on Saturday 25th November 2006 2:44pm

That was so funny. The last lines were clinchers. LOL

seeker77 posted a comment on Tuesday 31st October 2006 6:39am

This story is a cool one shot, it hit close to home for me. Keep up the writing. More cracked though !!!!!!!

Bocardo posted a comment on Thursday 21st September 2006 1:46am

"nothing to worry about then" hahahahaha. poor ron. but seriously, nice story.