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iceinferno84 posted a comment on Friday 22nd September 2006 4:06am for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

not to be picky or anything but the correct quote from macbeth is "lay on macduff" not lead. good story so far.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 16th August 2006 4:45am for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

Outstanding. I hate stories that have Harry taking the whole story to hookup with someone. This looks like it could be very interesting.

gunny

KenF posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 6:09am for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

Harry blows up a suprise birthday party (again), and a first snog. Great chapter.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 24th February 2006 4:56am for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

Great that-will-teach-you-not-to-surprise-Harry. Excellent. And I always love it when Moody gives Harry a 'well done' for being constantly vigilant.

So many fic writers have Harry and Ginny, or Harry and whoever, realizing in one moment they are IN LOVE and declaring undying devotion or something like that.

I your fic I like that they kiss and then he asks her to go steady. Then they discuss the problems of dating, Harry style. Very realistically teenager-ish.

Great work!

Musings of Apathy replied:

Ah, the wonders of re-writing...the first posted version of this eight months ago or so was more of a 'kiss and we are in love'. It is amazing what a couple of sentenses can do.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

freakyfinger posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd February 2006 7:13am for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

Yah! I love to read about the awkward Harry trying to admit his feelings to Ginny . . . *sigh* I'm never awkward around girls, but I never get that kind of responce . . .

AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Tuesday 21st February 2006 5:14pm for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

good chapter update soon

ridmania posted a comment on Tuesday 21st February 2006 9:27am for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

awesome stuff like always!!!

AK posted a comment on Tuesday 21st February 2006 9:15am for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

hehe
well if I had to mark this chapter
writing style: 4/10
fun: 8/10
story content: 8/10
how to improve: ... don't look at me I don't know but when I read it I found myself thinking that you kinda take too many shortcuts, don't describe stuff (surrounding, character reactins), or at least you don't describe it enough... or something

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Monday 20th February 2006 10:18pm for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

Awesome chapter. Loved the kissing scene. I'm surprised Dumbledore didn't think Harry would react the way he did. I look forward to more.

'Mione

kittykatluver posted a comment on Monday 20th February 2006 10:06pm for Chapter 7: Birthday Surprise

I knew it!! I KNEW he was gonna do that! Haha, good job!