eg posted a comment on Saturday 27th December 2008 2:35pm for Chapter 9

wow...great chapter. Please update soon. THis deserves attention lol...seriously it's a good story and I'd love to read more.

ReaderRabbit posted a comment on Monday 22nd December 2008 12:39am for Chapter 9

I just discovered your stories. I was very leary about reading this one as it seems to be almost dead with 9 chapters in 2 years.

It is a fantastic story and I hope you will continue and speed your posts.

I have read easily a 1000 stories on various sites and can count on one hand the number of authors I have pleaded with to continue their stories so I hope you will take this as the huge compliment it is meant as.

Ty

millie johanson posted a comment on Saturday 20th December 2008 2:51pm for Chapter 9

Hello, are you still out theire???????
I hope you and your family are well and are enjoying this Christmas season.
Good luck with your writting.
I am spending a lot of time writting Authors of my favorit stories asking if they are ok and are going to write more! We are snowed in out for one day and it started snowing again this is the 2 time in two weeks no church. I have lots of time to read.....but 2 of my favorit stories and some authors haven't written in over a year.This, Family Inseparable and Janus Gift From the Past, Promise For the Future (MaxFic &PhoenixAeternum told me they aren't writting this so I don't know who is but I love it.
Please write more....maybe a christmas present to us for being so good and waiting..........
Thanks for taking us for the ride.
Happy Christmas to you and your family..
Miss Millie 2emillie@comcast.net

LizzieB posted a comment on Monday 15th December 2008 8:32am for Chapter 9

I love this story! The threads are finely interwoven and promice one heck of a confrontation when the time is right. Please continue to add to this lovely story. Thanks for your work.

Katherine Summers posted a comment on Thursday 4th December 2008 3:27pm for Chapter 9

This is such a cute story! I really hope you're going to continue it.

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 12th October 2008 6:23am for Chapter 9

I just reread this chapter. I really like this story and I look forward to your next update. I hope everything is going ok with you and that you are still writing. Thank you for your great stories. pms

Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Friday 10th October 2008 10:48pm for Chapter 9

This story has the real makings for a great read. The plots are great.

Please update soon as I can't wait to continue reading about his adventures and how they are going to keep getting away with their marriage.

When is someone going to stumble across Ginny's name change while checking on some sort of other information?

Please update soon. Thanks again for a great start to a story.

bluminous posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 3:03am for Chapter 9

one of the better young harry and ginny pairings, explaining the bond developing between them. not the tadah! we have a bond! fics ive read. im really REALLY LOOKING forward to how this will turn up, family insparable is a good read. with great plots and character developments. dont stop!

hptrump posted a comment on Sunday 5th October 2008 9:06am for Chapter 9

Please don't give up on your story. This is one of the best I have ever read. Can wait for the next chapter.

Professor Complexity posted a comment on Monday 29th September 2008 12:24am for Chapter 9

Once again a rather good piece of work. I look forward to the next update.

Godogma posted a comment on Wednesday 17th September 2008 6:13am for Chapter 9

A lovely tale, and quite a good one. It seems that in this universe of the wizarding world Harry is quite happy at a much earlier age. I quite approve.

I haven't noticed any glaring errors, however I did note that you used bangers several times and a british friend told me that bangers was only used when they were being spoken of (whats a banger? Some sort of sausage?)

I look forward to your future updates.

Comet Moon posted a comment on Saturday 6th September 2008 7:53am for Chapter 9

Wow.

Sorry, had planned to review this the first time, but forgot.

Came back hoping for more and realized I hadn't

So here goes.

Albus is digging his own grave. He knows the abuse now, yet plans to PAY for them to keep him.

Bat Bogey is to good for him

A new love/marriage with the innocents of a child's(Childrens) heart.

Sweet

I wonder who will be the next to find out about them. And how they will react?

Is Bill still living at home? You said he was starting with the bank, but not where he lived.

I'd still love to have Luna preform one of the cerimonys. Or even another mystical creature.

So the charm is powerful enought to cause Molly to see a branch and Log.

SNORT.

What a way to think of her son-in-law.

You know, maybe Arthur would be next trying to check Ginny's information for either school or minisry and finding her new name.

OR a reporter (Not nessiarily Rita) looking for info on the Boy Who Lived.

Hope to see more soon

Faithful (If forgetful )Fan

Ja ne

Jim

Carol Layland posted a comment on Friday 18th July 2008 4:24am for Chapter 9

When are you going to update this wonderful story? I keep watching for an update, another chapter, or something. Please. You do have a wonderful start here

squidtamer posted a comment on Monday 30th June 2008 6:39pm for Chapter 9

I must say that I REALLY, truly enjoyed this story. I'm not the kind of reviewer that typically posts the standard "Squeee!! I loved it , post again soon!" kind of review. But this was so enjoyable that I'm almost tempted to. -_^

Overall there was very little wrong in spelling or grammar save a few minor typos here and there. The pacing was excellent, and overall story layout was very good. Characterization seemed to be right on the money for children as young as this, which I find to fail miserably in most stories that deal with most pre-teens. Especially dialogue. This seemed to work very well overall. Quite a standout.

I found myself unable to put the reader (I use a Sony) down and staying up quite late to find out when they would be caught, or reveal themselves. This also rarely happens to me with a fanfic. This means I gave a crap about the characters, which is rough thing to do with as many fics as I've read now. After all it's the same characters over and over. I'm not really a shipper of any kind either.

So keep up the excellent work, and thanks a ton for the entertainment and enjoyment you've brought me. I hope you continue to update this, as I'm interested to see how it all works out. I'm off to sample the other fics on your page here and maybe take a brief look at other sites for more fics.

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 29th June 2008 6:31am for Chapter 9

I really love this story. I was just looking at the update frequency. You have been consistent. I appreciate how hard it is to write such a good story. I just wanted you to know that I check on this story often and I thank you for what you have written so far. I will keep checking on your updates. Thanks for writing. pms

Carol Layland posted a comment on Saturday 10th May 2008 8:32am for Chapter 9

Oh...! What a lovely story you have begun. I just love it When will you post the next chapter or chapters.

Mariposa posted a comment on Thursday 8th May 2008 2:26am for Chapter 9

This is such a sweet story! I'm enjoying it immensely!

Mionefan posted a comment on Sunday 4th May 2008 11:06am for Chapter 9

Oh, I am surprised that Molly wasn't able to see Harry. Excellent use of the Galaxy orb. They were lucky. I hope this is all exposed soon. It'll become quite sticky when it does. Dumbledore will hit the roof. Arthur may be the easiest to convince, Molly the hardest.

bookish327 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 8:55am for Chapter 9

As another reviewer said, my first assumption is that Grandmum Prewett will tell Charlie that Ginny received the gold from her. However, on second thought, I hope that Grandmum chooses to tell the couple that now is the time to choose honesty and stop perpetuating this stressful sham. Whatever her response to the Potters will be, I'm sure you will make it more creative than anything I can currently come up with.

I'm already wondering how things will change when Arthur and Molly DO find out about this marriage. Will they let the couple continue to reside in Ginny's bedroom at the Burrow? Other bond fanfic's generally involved the Weasleys having trouble with this level of physical intimacy at Ginny and Harry's ages. Let alone the bathing together aspect. :-)

It is my hope that this will not be dragged out with several more "near-misses" where Harry is almost caught several more times. I also hope that Dumbledore doesn't determinedly cling to his plan for Harry to return to his relatives EVEN AFTER he's eventually informed of Harry and Ginny's marriage. With the level of verbal, physical, and psychological abuse they've inflicted on Harry, it's not worth the blood-protection that the wards provide. Also, I really hope that no one decides to have Harry and Ginny living separately (e.g., him at Privet Drive and her at the Burrow). I don't see these two allowing that to happen, no matter how much more protected Harry is from Dark wizards while he's there. They need each other too much, now that they've bonded so deeply. Also, the question of how they will be housed when they are eventually attending Hogwarts also makes me wonder (as I think another reviewer might have mentioned). Will they still be in the single-sex dormitories, or will they be given special living quarters in which to stay together as a couple? Will Ginny be able to start school the same year as Harry? (If so, obviously Luna will be a year behind her then, which isn't a HUGE problem, just a change, since Luna is a such a good friend of Ginny's.)

I know, these speculations are probably more suited to your forum than a review, but I haven't checked out the forum yet. I've enjoyed your story so much, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for putting so much time and energy into your work. Great job!

oldman posted a comment on Monday 28th April 2008 7:32am for Chapter 9

So you still leave us with a cliff hanger When will Harry and Ginny tell their family? Will Grand ma Prewitt have to mediate? Will Dumbledore's "arrangement" with Petunia work and will Harry and Ginny react via the Goblins?