ozmial posted a comment on Thursday 25th October 2012 9:29pm for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

well while i think you had a lot of good ideas for this story such as how his magic would get stronger and his teleportation device i belive you need to learn to be suttle. you cant just have your charecters literally just saying whatever come to mind. i could of put up with it though cause it was a good story.

the reason im havin to quit reading this story is cause harry (or anyone for that matter) would become very angry about a room full of people questioning him about his life at the dursleys... not to mention harry is a rather private person even if this is ooc harry. he even mentioned he wouldnt want his whole life to be a open book.

so here you are havin him spill all his secrets about his abuse to a room full of people under a truth serium. not to mention he didnt even get a answer about what it was about... for all he knew they could of been askin about what the prophysy ( mmmm dont know how thats spelled).

im not tryin to be mean. only give you somthan to work with in the future so your stories become better

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 16th August 2006 8:35am for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

Very good.

gunny

KenF posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 8:47pm for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

Percy taking a longer nickname was funny.

What was the bit about shrimp? Sounds a bit like something out of the Hitchhikers' Guide.

Musings of Apathy replied:

It was from Buffy the Vampire Slayer, although, I can see where you get the Hitchhiker's Guide thing.   Hitchhiker's guide doesn't have alternate realities, though.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 1:07am for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

While "reality with shrimp" made me giggle my head off (I’m guessing it’s a Buffy reference and that you’re a BtVS fan too), I have to mention "Mom" slipped in again and for some strange reason you have "Author" for "Arthur".

lordblack posted a comment on Tuesday 28th March 2006 1:22pm for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

you forgot to say harry lives on earth!

Musings of Apathy replied:

That is what I meant by "Terra".

Please, if you dislike my writing as much as you obviously do, do not read it.   If you feel compelled to read it, don't try to make my life bleaker by sharing your thoughts on the matter.   I like constructive criticism, but what you have been giving me attacks the bones of the story.   If you can't agree with the bones of a story, there is no basis for enjoyment.   Constructive criticism starts with agreeing with the framework of the story and helping to build a better story from it.   I will not change my work as fundementally as you have stated the necessity for, in a large part because of my not agreeing with your statements.   View this as an oportunity to spend your time on presuits that will bring you more enjoyment and me less frustration.

I invite you to write the perfect Harry Potter FanFiction, as I, obviously, have not.

Terry Swain posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 10:44am for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

That was a great chapter. i like the bit about Harry and Ginny talking with just their eyes. :)

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 6:30am for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

This was hysterical:

"Fred and George looked like innocent angels. Of course the magically conjured halos were a bit over the top."

Your complications of Harry's majority are fascinating. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Cheers!

Graup posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 2:26am for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

I have enjoyed the story to this point. Interesting idea for Harry to become an adult. It somewhat boggles the mind, since all of the adults in his life have not really measured up - maybe Arthur and Molly being the exception.

Thanks for posting the story.

kittykatluver posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 1:58am for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

O, how sweet! Non-verbal communication already!? AWW!

XanDutch posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 12:16am for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

Reality with shrimp!

*rolls around laughing*

AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 6:05pm for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

good chapter update soon

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 1:12pm for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

Interesting chapter. I wonder what instructions the Lily and James left for harry.


'Mione

AK posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 12:44pm for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

eh, a system of justice where they keep springing surprises on Harry, while he doesn't have an advocate seems rather wrong in my eyes (okay the are not bad surprises but seriously...)

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 12:28pm for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

The Ministry actually *admits* they stuffed up, and stuffed up badly, and emancipated Harry. (And no resistance from Dumbledore, either.) Good on Harry.

freakyfinger posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 12:26pm for Chapter 13: Hearing and Seeing

OH! An inheritance!