Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
Chapter 18: First Sunday
By Musings of Apathy
Reviews
KenF posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 11:21pm for Chapter 18: First Sunday
Oh, and I liked the description of how D spent his morning too.
KenF posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 11:20pm for Chapter 18: First Sunday
I liked the idea of the tour as a way to help incoming students. Using it to show Dumbledore a lesson was a pretty good bonus, though.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 4:02am for Chapter 18: First Sunday
Adored the line "Anyway, our illustrious Headmaster spent his morning talking to a spontaneous combustion-prone peacock and a millennia old castle." Loved Harry's reasoning too.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 12:32pm for Chapter 18: First Sunday
Fascinating take on the whole Dumbledore/Harry confrontation. Yours is a kinder gentler Harry. Rather unique.
Very positive Harry tack.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 8:54am for Chapter 18: First Sunday
Fantastic chapter. I love how you handled them explaining things lovingly to Dumbledore.
freakyfinger posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 9:31pm for Chapter 18: First Sunday
This is an interesting twist. A Harry that isn't mad about Dumbledore's influence on his past . . .
Musings of Apathy replied:
It's been done and I wanted to address the issue honestly and then step away. If Harry were mad and not understanding, that would be the plot.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
kittykatluver posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 2:34pm for Chapter 18: First Sunday
Ah, very interesting...Keep up the good work!
ridmania posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 1:42pm for Chapter 18: First Sunday
awesome
Sssith posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 12:45pm for Chapter 18: First Sunday
Good chapter.
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 10:52am for Chapter 18: First Sunday
Wonderful! The tour and luncheon was an awesome idea. And making it seem like it was Dumbledor's idea was genius. Keep up the good work
'Mione
Musings of Apathy replied:
Thanks. It seemed to me that every school has some sort of freshman orientation to let the students know where the classes are and how to get there. Harry and Ginny just used it as a way to introduce the students to the school without the house barriers.
Manatheron posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 10:35am for Chapter 18: First Sunday
Interesting, Interesting....
For a moment I had thought that this was one of the functions of that runes that Harry had kept for himself... Does this mean that harry knows the school is sentient?
Sonicdale posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 10:17am for Chapter 18: First Sunday
just a quick review.
That last line... those words need the ominous "Dum Dum DUuuuuuuummmm!!!!" at the end of them. Heh
Good work. Liked the chair bit. Nice touch.
James Benfield posted a comment on Thursday 23rd March 2006 9:51am for Chapter 18: First Sunday
Great chapter!
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 16th August 2006 12:31pm for Chapter 18: First Sunday