Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
By Musings of Apathy
Reviews
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 17th August 2006 1:27am for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
Nice one.
gunny
Dragen posted a comment on Wednesday 16th August 2006 8:13am for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
Another great chapter, I love the story so far... I love this part (‘He should learn to wear earplugs to bed,’ Harry added silently.) I thought it to be real funny... keep up the great work.
KenF posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 12:48am for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
Ah, I love it. Hermione is quite impressive if she can keep going for two hours straight. And I guess Bill and Charlie really did teach Ginny how to deliver a punch.
I'd bawl Harry out for overheating himself, but Ginny did a better job already. I liked the way you did that part.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 4:28am for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
That final line was hilarious. Great chapter.
Patches posted a comment on Sunday 2nd April 2006 2:11am for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
Yeah for Hermione & Ginny & The Grangers! I'm so glad Ginny punched Dudley. Serves him right. Of course Harry over did it again! Some times he needs a witness to his "stuff" to protect him from himself! Ginny will see to that I'm sure. Thanks for writing such an entertaining chapter. pms
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Friday 31st March 2006 11:25am for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
I especially liked the last line.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 28th March 2006 9:09pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
This was one of the better 'tell-off-the-Dursleys' I have ever read.
And the information Harry assimilated while asleep in the infirmary was a very clever way to portray this.
I highly value 'clever.'
Musings of Apathy replied:
Thank you. That means a lot. I had to contend with a laziness on my part, not wanting to come up with and write out an entire block of Hermione's railings, and an opinion that if it got too long, it would be boring. I also did not believe that Hermione would do anything that I have seen before like changing them into pigs and hipos. That just doesn't fit her personality, at least not the Hermione I wanted to write.
AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 4:03pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
good chapter update soon
anonymous5 posted a comment on Monday 27th March 2006 12:05pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
oh, and while we're at it, thank you SO much for taking liberal advantage of the reply-to-review feature this site has to offer. It really makes it far more worthwhile to leave further reviews when I know they're not being ignored. ;)
okay enough praise - don't want you to get too psyched and think it's alright to put off posting the next chapter...! Thanks again.
Philipe posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 11:53pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
‘He should learn to wear earplugs to bed,’ Harry added silently .. Now, what i wouldn't give to see the scene were he wasn't as silent as he tought.. God that would have been fun.. hehe.. I don't think i ever review your chapters, aldo i've been reading it for a while now, but never did review. Just lasy i guess.. but i do love the story..
See ya, gotta go back to work..
P.
Musings of Apathy replied:
Thank you for your review and for reading, even when you didn't review. Welcome to the vocal minority.
freakyfinger posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 5:05pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
I like the last part!
Manatheron posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 2:34pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
:)
He should learn to wear earplugs eh? I am wondering slightly if the way harry reached the hospital was one of those holdover controls you wouldn't reveal to me, or if he was concious enough to transport himself?
Oh! and why a obsidian dragon?
Musings of Apathy replied:
Maybe. Every system should have some safety features. Harry was unconcious before he hit the ground.
An obsidian dragon as a homemade gift. Nothing plot-ish.
AK posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 12:57pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
or maybe you didnt forget... i just got it (the alert that is)
ridmania posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 12:41pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
lol awesome!!!!
AK posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 12:34pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
heh earplugs.... so how come he didnt feel dehydrated? anyhow you forgot to send the email alert!
Musings of Apathy replied:
Harry was distracted and he didn't think about it. If it were as easy as feeling dehydrated when you are busy, no one would ever reach heat exhaustion. I, myself, have felt close to heat exhaustion. I have had the chills in 110 degree heat. Not good.
anonymous5 posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 11:53am for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
Lovely chapter - good times! Only one small nit to pick:
...do not like bully’s," Ginny said...
plural of "bully" is "bullies" - apostrophe's are never used to make thing's plural.
Again, fun chapter. This story is a great read. Thanks so much for posting regularly!!
Musings of Apathy replied:
Thanks, I changed it. That is a bad habit of mine. The hard part is catching it on the re-write. It is too easy to read past when you were the one who wrote it the first time. I have soem good betas but I can't expect everything from them. In the end, it is my story and my fault. This site makes it so easy to edit, that I just do it when it is pointed out.
I will post each chapter as I get it ready, up to once a day (occasionally I will get ahead of myself and have several days posts saved up ready to go.)
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 7:55am for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
A most awesome chapter ... I loved Hermione's birthday celebration. Ginny giving Harry whatfor as he lay in the hospital wing was great. But I especially enjoyed the last line ... But I don't think wearing earplugs to bed will solve the problem unless he can stay out of trouble ... then the earplugs would be a moot point.
Keep up the good work
'Mione
Musings of Apathy replied:
Thank you. I thought, when I read your previous reviews that you would like this chapter.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Terry Swain posted a comment on Sunday 26th March 2006 7:32am for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority
Great chapter. :)
Darthloki posted a comment on Wednesday 18th October 2006 1:02pm for Chapter 20: Hermione ’s Majority