Harry Potter and the Cracked Reservoir
Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
By Musings of Apathy
Reviews
KenF posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 6:17am for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
I meant to say that I liked having Harry dance with Hermione.
I need a beta for my reviews...
KenF posted a comment on Sunday 23rd July 2006 6:15am for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
Ginny showed remarkable restraint in dealling with Malfoy. If I'd been on the scene, there would probably been some damage to the caves. Reductor curses are messy that way...
Damned impressive spell work on Miss Weasley's part. Hitting Malfoy 3 times (stunner, binder, and sticking spell) while in the air involved some rather rapid casting. Remind me to stay on her good side.
Draco should be turned into a mouse and given to Crookshanks. Or maybe a rat... Crookie could play with him longer that way.
I liked you having Harry dance with Ginny too. Not many fics have couples mixing, and it is one of the true pleasures of a formal dance.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 6:03am for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
Poor Many. Great chapter. BTW, no candy corn in the UK - sorry, I like the stuff too but we just can't buy it over here. Smarties or M&Ms might be a good replacement sweet.
kittykatluver posted a comment on Friday 21st April 2006 12:00am for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
Oh, Malfoy, you are gonna get it....DIE MALFOY
Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 19th April 2006 7:48am for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
Oh... I hope malfoy gets expelled for this one, sexual assult is one of the VILEST things that can be done to a person.
Terry Swain posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 9:46pm for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
Good chapter. :)
freakyfinger posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 9:54am for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
Damn Malfoy . . . always has to ruin everything good . . .
amulder posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 6:05am for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
I note that one minor typo - you've got "patrificus" instead of "petrificus" - has carried over from the ff.net version. There is a dictionary floating around of Harry Potter words that you can load into your spell checker. Kokopelli mentioned it a few months ago. I like the bit about the Weasley's teaching their sons to be honarble gentlemen. It really really rings true. From canon, I see the parents as fairly old-fashioned, strict but loving, and all that. thanks for sharing.
Musings of Apathy replied:
Thank you. I am correcting that now. Thank you for the notice. Stupefy was also spelled wrong.
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Tuesday 18th April 2006 12:26am for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues
Interesting turn of events, I look forward to seeing Malfoy getting his due . . .
Keep up the good work
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 17th August 2006 6:57am for Chapter 29: Cavorting Continues