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Gary the Grouch posted a comment on Tuesday 5th January 2016 7:21pm for Chapter 2: Control Effort

Interesting premise for a story - one I don't recall ever reading before. The author is skilled in the mechanics of writing, so at this point, the story is looking very interesting to me. Unfortunately, it does not appear finished, and the last update was years ago, which is discouraging. On to the next chapter!

Dragen posted a comment on Wednesday 16th August 2006 3:57am for Chapter 2: Control Effort

What a great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next in the story... keep up the good work.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 16th August 2006 12:16am for Chapter 2: Control Effort

Good chapter.

gunny

KenF posted a comment on Saturday 22nd July 2006 3:00am for Chapter 2: Control Effort

I liked your clay-pot analogy for magic and the way it give different potentials for power and endurance.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 7:25am for Chapter 2: Control Effort

Liked the metaphor for magic you used.

Peter1 posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd May 2006 11:44pm for Chapter 2: Control Effort

Hi
Great story


noticed one small spelling mistake about 3/4 of the way through the chapter though
You know that his school sent a note last year that said that he would have to loose weight because they did not make clothes big enough for him?

Musings of Apathy replied:

Thank you.  I am going through and changing it.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 14th February 2006 12:24am for Chapter 2: Control Effort

Ch.2 - - Very interesting development. If Harry were a bit more angsty in your fic, he would be upset that he had to 'start all over again.'

He is not angsty in this way, and this will help him advance more quickly and with less distractions of teenaged 'woe is me.'

Yours is a fascinating new concept.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2006 5:35pm for Chapter 2: Control Effort

good story. I am looking forward to where it goes. Thank you for writing.
pms

Sue posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2006 6:41am for Chapter 2: Control Effort

I am glad to see this is being posted here. I was sad to see it taken down over at that other site. Thank you for sharing.

Sue

Terry Swain posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2006 3:28am for Chapter 2: Control Effort

Great chapter.:)

Patches posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 5:58pm for Chapter 2: Control Effort

Very intersting. I am looking forward to how you develope this story. I am constantly amazed byt the creative tallent in the fanfiction authors. Thank you so much for the entertainment you provide.
pms

ridmania posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 1:36pm for Chapter 2: Control Effort

good stuff keep up the good work