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Grace Cole posted a comment on Wednesday 25th June 2008 12:41pm for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

Wow!!! I had never read this story before. Then I found it recommended on someone's site. I couldn't stop reading! I am desperate to find out what happens. Keep up the GREAT work!!!!

Malchior posted a comment on Sunday 15th June 2008 11:02am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

AH NOO, Why'd it have to end now? I'm hoping you update this soon, but if not, I'll wait.


P.S.
That little red dot on your forehead is NOT a laser sight. No pressure :)

Patches posted a comment on Monday 5th May 2008 4:49pm for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

Leave it to Malfoy to make a sport a death trap for one of his enemies. He knew exactly what he was doing. If Harry hadn't saved Ginny she would have died. Now Dumbledore has expelled him but that doesn't mean he will cease to be a problem. I look forward to more of this story. I know you have many other things to do but I really hope you continue. Thanks for writing. pms

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Thursday 17th April 2008 10:51am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

I do hope this continues, it's just getting good!

k13cat posted a comment on Thursday 20th March 2008 3:02am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

I guess this will teach me to doublecheck the status of a story. A friend gave me the link to the first chapter & I assumed the story was finished--really, with 47 chapters why wouldn't it be? Silly reader.

Still, I've had a lot of fun reading this story the last two days. There are a lot of interesting concepts & plot lines to follow & I like Harry's portrayal. I will say that there is a bit of emotional disconnect for huge chunks of the story; I just don't feel what Harry is feeling which lessens the experience.

A credit to your writing is that you've managed to tone down Hermione's incessant whining & sense of outraged entitlement to know every last detail of Harry's life to a bearable level--too many writers fall into that annoying trap. (They do that with Ginny too which explains why I don't like either girl most of the time). I am surprised that Hermione wants the answers to the runic transport just handed to her. You would think she could have paid Harry a compliment about it by now.

The ginny/harry sap gets a bit much at times but I've seen worse. However, the reaction to when he & bill went off alone to investigate the pendant alarm proves that she still has a lot of growing up to do.

The development of the animagus transformation has been interesting. I particularly enjoyed Harry's summer of learning & the reclamation of the Chamber of Secrets. Your follow-through regarding plot moments with Remus needs a bit of work as his character, & the relationship with Harry, is rather inconsistent.

It would be nice if you could put a note on the news page as to whether or not readers should just stop hoping for a continuation. I know that real life & writers block happens, but after a year with no updates just a line of info so people don't whine at you incessantly in reviews goes a long way. :-)

Good story, nice plot development, and suspense. Thanks for sharing your talent.

DukeBrymin posted a comment on Thursday 21st February 2008 8:07am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

Very interesting and enjoyable story. I'm glad Malferret got expelled, and we of course know that Ginny will be all right. I'd love to see this finished, but at least what you have is exceedingly fun to read.
Thanks

timt020 posted a comment on Sunday 20th January 2008 4:12pm for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

Please update soooooooooooon!!!!!

Omeganian posted a comment on Thursday 10th January 2008 3:52am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

I mean, really, Malfoy has harmed Ginny and seems to have fulfilled the prophecy. I wish you will write soon about him getting it from his own side...

Aelita posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2007 10:04am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

WOW this is so good! But you have to finish it and fast!

hptrump posted a comment on Sunday 18th November 2007 6:43am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

Been a long time since last update. Hopefully you will update soon.

cantante posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2007 11:09pm for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

PLEASE tell me that you plan on continuing this story. You can't possibly end it like that! lol anyway... this is a great story and i am continuously grateful to have been directed to this site. keep up the good work!

freckleforce93 posted a comment on Thursday 4th October 2007 5:23am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

OH COME ON!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!

rune1806 posted a comment on Saturday 4th August 2007 5:48am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

hi just started reading, i like stories that deal with interpersonal relationship so i find your to be a very good one. keep up the great writing, i look forward to your next updat.

seeker77 posted a comment on Wednesday 11th July 2007 11:58am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

More of this outstanding story please. I just finished my 3rd reread. its very good and i am hanging on the edge of my seat

tekajay posted a comment on Sunday 8th July 2007 3:20pm for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

Nice chapter. Overall good strory pace. Waiting for the next chapter!!!!

Wolfric posted a comment on Tuesday 26th June 2007 4:15pm for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

Apparently I neglected to leave a review when I first read this chapter. I like it and this story quite a bit. I hope Snape gets his attitude severely realigned by Harry. I am wondering what the consequences of Hermione's outburst will be. If it is Fudge sitting in the chair He would love any excuse to go after Harry. If it is someone else then the mystery is deeper. Malfoy bashing is always fine with me; maybe it was Malfoy Sr in the chair I can't remember if he is at liberty in this story or not. Thanks for writing and I look forward to further installments when you can. W.

Neil Glover posted a comment on Sunday 17th June 2007 4:53pm for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

Great story, i look forward to the next chapter

Infin1x posted a comment on Thursday 7th June 2007 11:37am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

I am not sure if it's ironic or just kinda funny that the fake prophecy looks like it might not be so fake. I've got to congratulate you on this the earlier chapters were slightly off but each chapter slowly improved.

alex posted a comment on Sunday 27th May 2007 4:40am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

ugh dude leavin us hangin like that i hate you hmph

ilchianti posted a comment on Thursday 24th May 2007 11:58am for Chapter 47: Gryffindor v Slytherin

First, the ending to this chapter is cruel and inhumane to readers of fanfiction.

Second, I have yet to find another fanfic that is so completely enthralling as this one was. I'm begging you, please relieve my misery, as well as that of many others, and write and publish the next chapter. I don't know how long I can take the suspense anymore.

Great fanfics by the way.