Family Inseparable
Chapter 9
By Musings of Apathy
Reviews
Pooky posted a comment on Saturday 26th April 2008 4:00am for Chapter 9
I love this whole story! I discovered it just a few weeks ago. I love Harry/Ginny stories, especially when they come together early. I love that they are married, the innocence that they have, and the fact that they keep "doing" marriage rituals because they like how they feel. They must be the most "married" couple in history! Keep up the great work and please update soon! --Chris (Pooky)
reynaldo posted a comment on Thursday 24th April 2008 10:10am for Chapter 9
wow i like your fic it's great and funny
s2 posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd April 2008 11:42pm for Chapter 9
I was really pleased to see this story updated! I think it is an interesting premise and I can't wait to find out what happen next. I enjoy your writing and creativity.
koppe posted a comment on Saturday 19th April 2008 6:55pm for Chapter 9
Another great chapter! I really love the way you write from their perspective; the part about being married and her husband living with being something Charlie may feel the parents needed to know was priceless.
I'm wondering a bit about what sort of a deal Dumbledore struck with Petunia, and if that will make the Dursley's trying to reclaim custody. Guess Dumbledore should've asked about the *other* Potter-accounts too...
So the neckless works even better than I thoght...? Though I must admit I was slightly disappointed, as I thought for sure this would be the chapter when the parents found out...
Hope Grandma is able to calm Charlie.
What will happen when they start school? Will the school -- or maybe the Hat -- make some special concidertations?
I must admit I'm also looking forward to when they gain some more knowledge than their childish notions about what a husband and wife actually *do* together... e.g. that it's not *just* about sharing a bed. Not that I expect them do that, but their reaction to "the awful truth" about why people marries should be fun.
Keep up the great work, and update soon.
rune1806 posted a comment on Friday 18th April 2008 7:09am for Chapter 9
I do not know what to say, this does nothing to move to story along. Well writen but what was the point.
lydiakate98 posted a comment on Thursday 17th April 2008 12:41am for Chapter 9
You are teasing me! I wanted to see Molly's reaction so badly. But the new chapter was great and very much appreciated.
Sterling posted a comment on Wednesday 16th April 2008 11:35am for Chapter 9
I really do like this story. So I hope you don't take my critique remiss. However, I believe that this story is becoming a bit stagnant. Harry and Ginny need to be found out sooner rather then later. Having marriage ceremonies and being nearly found out is fine and all but it has been a few chapters of pretty much the same type of thing and I believe the plot needs to be advanced. About the only thing of substance that happened was that Dumbledore discovered Harry was missing and that Petunia was glad to see him go. Both points could have been made a lot quicker with no harm to the story.
Once again I would like to say that I have very much enjoyed this story and thanks for sharing your time and efforts. It is appreciated :-)
Shady Dareks posted a comment on Wednesday 16th April 2008 9:27am for Chapter 9
Awwww! It's so sweet! I love it.
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Wednesday 16th April 2008 2:25am for Chapter 9
Excellent. I am loving every chapter of this story. Please update! I love poor Dumbledore's bewilderment, it is so funny!
liquidfyre posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 10:27pm for Chapter 9
YAYYYYY i was REALLY starting to worry bout this story is a damn good one and thought was getting lefted behind. Good chapter and i honestly dont think they are going to be able to keep the secret much longer huh?
Keep up the good work though and hopefully you can update a bit sooner next time.
While your at it if you know how to get ahold of ishtar kick him/her in the butt and make them get out a new family values. I think im gonna hafta start putting this on all my reviews hehe
withfujkilp9087528nvhc posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 9:36pm for Chapter 9
You know I just can't wait for the next chapter. I am usually very patient, but not for the next chapter.
DukeBrymin posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 7:31pm for Chapter 9
Yeay!!! Another chapter of one of my favorite stories!! Sneaky, though. I'm sure we all thought Molly would find Harry this time, but she still manages to be thrown off the track. Is it possible Charlie becomes the first to find out! And Dumbledore really is obtuse, isn't he?
Anyway, great chapter, looking forward to seeing how Molly finally finds out, and the adjustments she will need to make.
Ricky Gene Thompson posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 8:47am for Chapter 9
Thank you for this tender heart warming update
John Davis posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 7:49am for Chapter 9
really starting to worry that you might have given up on this story, glad to see it.
gotta love the way Dumbledore seems to never see anything when it is not in his plans.
love it hope you will post again soon
gotta see what Charlie will do
will grandmum squeal? hury and post please
Ben10 posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 7:35am for Chapter 9
This story is quite original.
Prince Charon posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 7:35am for Chapter 9
Nice. Won't Dumbledore be surprised, when he realizes that its already to late to return Harry to the Dursleys? :)
Thank you for updating.
More soon, please.
amysds posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 5:41am for Chapter 9
I can't believe he's willing to send Harry back to the dursleys! How sorry could he be if he's going to just bribe them to let him back?! I hope one of the other teachers like McGonagal and Poppy gang up on him with a few other teachers and demand to know just why he would inflict that sort of abuse on Harry. Just in sending him back to his abusers is sending the message that his feelings don't count, he's going to be hurt and alone and just how is dumbledore planning on overseeing his treatment? If it was so easy why hadn't he done it before etc. Really push home the long term effects of sending him back. I'm tired of reading fics where Dumbledore knows all even when people doubt him, they figure it's dumbledore and do it anyways...
Lesa posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 5:07am for Chapter 9
I've probably said this already, but this is absolutely adorable, please keep writing!
Aelita posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 4:30am for Chapter 9
I don't think this is merely acceptable I think that its great and that you are being to hard on yourself! Good luck getting past your writers block! I just wanted to say I like the part where Mrs. Weasley couldn't see Harry and when the Goblin tricked Dumbledore! good chapter!
kyoshi posted a comment on Monday 28th April 2008 7:00am for Chapter 9