By Musings of Apathy
Reviews
AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 5:20pm
good chapter update soon
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 2:02pm
A most awesome addition to a fantabulous story. I hope that upon reflection, Hermione doesn't get too upset about Harry having to convince Ron to not spend too much time in QQS.
'Mione
Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 12:07pm
{pouts}
Figures you'd only have gotten this far...
{Grin}
Good work.
Musings of Apathy replied:
Work on re-edit/re-write is going well. I have added content to a couple of chapters from previously posted versions. Overall, I hope that it is better.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Mike.
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 6:40pm
Very good. I really like this story. I like the way Harry is using his mind to develope new magical experience and expertise. I'm glad he and Dumbledore are doing so well. I am especially glad that Ron and Hermione are ok with everything. I look forward to your next update.
Thank you for writing.
pms
James Benfield posted a comment on Friday 3rd March 2006 12:46am
Great chapter. I have to say, I was more than a bit pissed when FF.net deleted your stories. I am damned glad that you found another site for your stories. Keep up the good work.
James
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 2nd March 2006 10:28pm
Very interesting how you had Harry tell them about the prophecy. It is a part of a complete story of his life and of the events leading up to, during, and immediately after the battle of the Department of Mysteries.
Clever 'truce' you created between the two couples for public displays of affection.
Well done.
AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Thursday 2nd March 2006 6:09pm
good chapter update soon
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 2nd March 2006 2:46pm
Wonderful chapter. Harry forgot to ask them if they wanted to know before he told them tho ... I'm pretty sure it's a moot point however, they would have wanted to know regardless. Keep up the good work.
'Mione
Musings of Apathy replied:
Well, you know Harry, in the whole thing, he forgot. It could never be the author writing it, reading it, editing it, posting it, having it banned, re-reading it, re-writing it, re-editing it, re-posting it and having missed that gaff every time. You are the first reviewer to ever catch that error, to my memory. So, now we just chalk it up to Harry's forgetfulness. Do not look behind the curtain.
Mike.
Zarz posted a comment on Saturday 25th February 2006 1:47am
This is really great so far! I am looking forward to seeing what Harry manages to do when he goes back to school, so please, update soon!
TNaSeein' posted a comment on Friday 24th February 2006 5:31am
I found you! Yay! :D I don't get ff.net they just keep deleting all the really good fics. I'm so glad that you have found a far better site to post at. You're in fantastic company :D I'm really enjoying re-reading this fic. I didn't think it was needed or possible you have made it better. Looking forward to you getting back to the 40-somethings though.
Musings of Apathy replied:
Thank you for making the trip over here. I am glad that you agree with me about the quality of authors on this site, it is an honor. It will take a while to catch up with where I was, but I hope that the story will be markedly better when we do. I am looking forward to it because I have had the second quidditch match written since before I posted chapter 1 the first time.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 24th February 2006 5:18am
Novel idea to go over Harry's background having Ron and Hermione tell the older Weasley boys.
Pranking Harry may not be a good idea. Pranking Ginny's Harry because of Ginny is probably a death wish.
Fun, fun, FUN!
Ishtar posted a comment on Friday 24th February 2006 4:56am
Good chapter. Note: In the very first sentence, the phrase "I mean Fred and George" should be removed. Authorial comments or comments addressed to the reader break the fourth wall and disrupt the narrative.
Musings of Apathy replied:
Thank you for reviewing.
It hadn't occured to me that my cute little thing disrupted the reader's flow, but I can see what you mean. In general I am against AN's so I will correct it.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 24th February 2006 4:56am
Great that-will-teach-you-not-to-surprise-Harry. Excellent. And I always love it when Moody gives Harry a 'well done' for being constantly vigilant.
So many fic writers have Harry and Ginny, or Harry and whoever, realizing in one moment they are IN LOVE and declaring undying devotion or something like that.
I your fic I like that they kiss and then he asks her to go steady. Then they discuss the problems of dating, Harry style. Very realistically teenager-ish.
Great work!
Musings of Apathy replied:
Ah, the wonders of re-writing...the first posted version of this eight months ago or so was more of a 'kiss and we are in love'. It is amazing what a couple of sentenses can do.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Friday 24th February 2006 4:37am
Why do I have the feeling that surprising Harry is not a good idea?
Your fabrication of the stone transportation system at Hogwarts is fascinating and most clever.
Bravo.
AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Thursday 23rd February 2006 5:14pm
good chapter update soon
Sonicdale posted a comment on Thursday 23rd February 2006 12:55pm
This story is shaping up well. There are some glaring punctuation and spelling mistakes, but I like the relationship of Harry and Dumbledore so far.
The visuals of a "cracked pot" had me wondering about some funny jokes - crackpot - potter - crackpotter ... :)
Good with the Chamber. Hope to see some fun stuff there.
Good work.
freakyfinger posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd February 2006 7:13am
Yah! I love to read about the awkward Harry trying to admit his feelings to Ginny . . . *sigh* I'm never awkward around girls, but I never get that kind of responce . . .
AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Tuesday 21st February 2006 5:14pm
good chapter update soon
ridmania posted a comment on Tuesday 21st February 2006 9:27am
awesome stuff like always!!!
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 6th March 2006 7:48pm