Minerva Granger posted a comment on Tuesday 25th December 2007 11:03pm

Come on, get a wriggle on. I want an update, and ASAP would be greatly appreciated. I love this fic.

Milarqui posted a comment on Sunday 23rd December 2007 11:09pm

Any plans on updating this fantabulous story???? I really like it, especially the parts in which Ginny and Harry get married :-) again and again! Poor guys, they don't know they are about to get caught by Molly! What will she say when she sees her only daughter getting married at the ripe age of eight years? What will she say when she realises that her youngest baby isn't hers anymore, but she's a Potter? What will Dumbledore say when Arabella tells him that Harry has run away from the Dursleys? What will he say when he hears that Harry is married?
I WANNA KNOW!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!

oldman posted a comment on Monday 10th December 2007 6:45pm

I've commented on this chapter but it came to me that you've not brought in the Goblins lately. How would their senior figure be titled? Hardly "your royal lowness" or even " your royal deepness" though that does sound more respectful how about Harry and Ginny coming up with a wizards translation from Goblin as "Great Depths Pickrake "?

garion posted a comment on Wednesday 5th December 2007 4:12pm

great story. hope to read the next part soon.

hptrump posted a comment on Tuesday 4th December 2007 12:55pm

Someone mentioned that Hogwarts would know where Harry is next year implying the acceptance letter but he is only 9 years old here.

Alex Mcpherson posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2007 8:44am

Dunno If i've reviewed already.
Picked up a typo:

Ginny didn't understand everything that her brother and daddy were talking about, but she enjoyed listening to her big brother Bill bring such an adult."

Shouldn't that be:

she enjoyed listening to her big brother Bill being such an adult.

It's when he's talking about the goblins, the paragraph before bill first mentions Prof. Binns.

I'm going through reading it again, but I'll add more to this review if i find any others (not that there were many in the first place.)

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She finished her bowl of porridge and dished another, adding marmalade and more plum jamb

Same section, just after Arthur says wizards wont think to ask non-humans for help if they don't know what to ask.
Jam, not Jamb. Dunno if they should be capitalised as names of foods. my english teachers never said and i alternated a lot and didn't think to ask ...

Can I take some pumpkin juice up with me."

should end with a question mark...

quick question, is this correct?:

His door opened, emitting his executive secretary.

It makes sense but, well to me it reads slightly 'off'...
i get the feeling that emitting should be a different word even though that sentance does read correctly. Something like '-, allowing entrance to his executive secretary.'
it's just after Pickrake reads Harry's first letter.

Ginny sat next to her father, this morning, so she decided that he was as good a source of information as she needed.

another where I think there should be a different word but am not sure on,
I think it should be:

Ginny sat next to her father, this morning, as she had decided that he was as good a source of information as she needed.

missing word, in bold:

When Harry finished bathing himself, he drained the water, careful to use clean water to rinse the residue from the sides and bottom of the claw foot tub.

otherwise, 'to use clean to rinse..' to use clean what? clean dirt? hehe.

Odd sentance, doesn't follow properly due to what you mean by rest:

He was wearing the same boxers and t-shirt that he wore the previous two nights, but Ginny made a good argument that he needed the rest.

if you were referring to more clothes, it would fit, but you immediate pointed out how tired he was, ensuring 'rest' to mean physical resting.
I think this would fit (bold: changes)

He was wearing the same boxers and t-shirt that he wore the previous two nights, using them as pyjamas, for Ginny had made a good argument that he needed to rest.

if how you put it is correct, please tell how to understand it how you meant since it doesnt make sense to me.

Harry puled the loose ends of the bow...

puled should be pulled.

can't spot anything else.
Oh one last... the invisibility cloak, you writing it to be the same as the one he got from dumbledore in canon? (the note did say 'time it was returned to you' or something, not got my books right now.) Dumbledore could have sent it to the family vault, then during Harry's first year before christmas, Dumbledore realised a few things were happening and wanted him to have a safety-net of sorts, remembered the cloak, got it back and wrote that note.
if it's a different one, then my point i was going to make is irrelevant.
...
if it is:
the cloak, according to the film, was more 'cloak' like, as Harry wore it completely, like a hoody/cloak, and just pulled the hood back for the 'floating head' trick. (although the subsequent wandering scene contradicted that bit...)
erm... nevermind. just remembered what it was used for throughout the books in addition to hiding Harry himself...
meh.

carlos20dgm posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2007 4:39am

please continue him this very good one the history you don't have it so abandoned

Jimbocous posted a comment on Friday 30th November 2007 9:47am

Good grins so far. I've have read this further, but got sidetracked by the wonderful recommendations you had listed at the beginning. Fun stuff, Looking forward to more.

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Tuesday 27th November 2007 9:38am

This is great! I don't want to bug you, but ou8ld you please update soon?

Jarvey posted a comment on Monday 26th November 2007 1:02am

Great story you have coming along here. Keep up the good work!

oldman posted a comment on Saturday 24th November 2007 7:05am

I'm just guessing; but it would be deliciously ironic if Molly ended up unwittingly becoming the essential witness to make another legal wedding powerful! Harry's secret location is of course going to be ''known" in Hogwarts next september. Thanks for another tantalising chapter.

Fate posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2007 8:49am

Wonderful!
Looking forward to what happens next!!

No Idea Why I Smile posted a comment on Tuesday 20th November 2007 12:29am

Holy crap...UPDATE SOON!

Wow...thanks for leaving that loverly...catch the sarcasm please...cliff hanger. We need the new chapter asap, okay?????

UPDATE! PLEASE!

ctattrie posted a comment on Monday 19th November 2007 4:13am

Fanatstic story. I love the way that Harry and Ginny just seem fit together. I can't wait to see if Molly will discover Harry or not. I hope that you plan to continue. Cheers!

Alexis posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 9:45am

Good chapter! Will Molly find out what her daughter has been up to?? Please update again soon!

Sakya posted a comment on Wednesday 14th November 2007 9:16am

Oh, oh, oh, please update soon. Please, please, please.

I was guessing Harry would have to wait another year so that he and Ginny would be able to go to Hogwarts together and only then everybody else would find out about his presence.

But lo and behold, it looks like they will find out now. hehehe.

I can't wait to see all the comotion.

Sssith posted a comment on Wednesday 14th November 2007 7:08am

Looking forward to seeing everything coming to a head.

Stoffe posted a comment on Wednesday 14th November 2007 5:09am

Ah, another chapter! It's always a pleasant surprise when they arrive - and always a disappointment when I reach the end, meaning another long wait. I do, however, understand the wait. There's a saying here (Sweden), which translates to "those who wait for something sweet" - and that certainly applies here.
This time, I almost missed the e-mail notification as well, as it was (for some unknown reason) sorted into my junk mail folder... Good thing I look through the thousands of mail in there every now and then.
I like the story, it's unique and different from almost all other fanfics out there, and it's well written.
It's been building up for a few chapters now, and things seems to be coming to a head soon... I just hope everything goes all right! Be kind, and please keep the screaming to a minimum, all right?
Keep up the good work, and I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter - perhaps sometime around February? :)

rodrigo2 posted a comment on Tuesday 13th November 2007 7:54am

Simply became one of my favorites. Hope you update it soon. I would also like to know if you intend on going all the way through Harry's life including all his Hogwarts years in this story or sequels. Please keep up the great work.

natalie posted a comment on Tuesday 13th November 2007 7:54am

this a brilliant story. harry and ginny are adorable. the build up to his discovery is great. i'm really looking forward to the next chapter. keep up the fantastic work.
cheers
natalie