Wookie13 posted a comment on Thursday 16th November 2006 7:15am

Wow! What a unique start to any story that I've ever read!!!! I love how all of this is starting and I hope for more of the same with the chapters to follow. The question that comes to mind is how is Ginny going to hide Harry?

PerfesserN posted a comment on Thursday 16th November 2006 3:46am

Disturbingly realistic depictions of abuse, physical, mental and probably sexual - abuse is about control, I wonder if Petunia and Dudley will ever recognize that they themselves are victims as well.
"He followed me home, can I keep him?" would be a good title for the next chapter.

Sheepstamper posted a comment on Thursday 16th November 2006 12:33am

Ohhh! this is very good.... keep going....

IceBlades posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 10:20pm

This is already shaping up to be an awesome story. I can't wait to read what comes next

CRose posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 8:23pm

Tons of potential here. We get to see the Demon Dursleys at it again. The next chapter should be quite interesting. Though I have a feeling that Dumbledore will show up eventually and force harry back to the Dursleys. It's what he does.

KenF posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 8:22pm

That's a long chapter. 7 year old Ginny may be a bit mature, but is just so cute. I hope you decide to run with this one for a bit... oh, and I hope you pay a bit of attention to Cracked Reservoir too.

Mark Stanley posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 8:15pm

Good story so far. I like how you have Harry and Ginny meet, and how Ginny figures out a way to keep in contact with Harry. Excellent handling of all the characters so far. Looking forward to seeing more.

noylj posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 4:05pm

There will be more, won't there? Soon?
One thing you can count with wizarding world adults, and the Weasleys in particular, is to say the wrong things and make assumptions that are almost universally wrong.
Now, if Ginny can just keep Harry away from any adults...

seeker77 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 12:56pm

very nice (long)chapter. I have been hooked on "Cracked" since I found it so I check your site daily for updates and found this one. I like it. Keep up the work this has a nice little what if to it that should play out to a nice story.

Michael Foerster posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 12:56pm

Wow, that's really tightly written. It's so good, it makes you want more of it. (Esp. the next morning, when Molly tries to wake her ;-) ).
Thanks.

graup posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 11:15am

Interesting start to the story. Good work, and I look forward to updates.

Thanks for sharing it.

The Midnight Poster posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 10:55am

Oh good, I was worried you were going to leav us with a clify. Looking forward on how Harry stays with Ginny.

John Davis posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 10:32am

This story is interesting. I hope to see more of it as soon as possible.

riegert8 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 10:31am

I like this chapter. It is funny how ginny got woke up, too bad that Ron is in trouble for sneaking in a dog. It nice that Ginny got a chance to go London and be there when Bill pick out a new suit. I like that Harry meet Ginny, it great that they spend time together. I was surprise that Harry would tell Ginny his home and how shock she is over that, It great that Ginny ask to be his friend. It nice that Ginny kiss Harry before he went home. I have to admit I wonder why Harry would be london in the first place, it make sence that he would have go shopping with hisso called family. It is great that Ginny ask for some Information over the things that her and Harry talk about. I do agree that it hard to see that anyone would abusied a child unless you see it first Hand. I was surprise that Ginny did not tell mother his full name when her mother asked, the reason is that she know that her parent have heard of Harry. It funny that Ginny is already talking about a meeting a special boy with her father, and that her and Harry would fight Evil wizard and Dragons and live Happy ever after. It would come as a big shock since she is seven year old and he would this won't happen as long as possible. I not am sure what I think about that Arthur and Molly tell their daughter that if he needs help that a member of the family or teacher or someone would help him, to me it sound like they are saying it not our business and we won't do anything and hope someone else will. It sad that Vernon would take his bad out on Harry.I like that Ginny keep on ask her parents to save Harry.It great that Harry could escape his aunt house, it great that he runs into Ginny again. It nice that Harry find someone that really care for him that she would worry, It nice that Harry got upset over the treatment of a new girl at his school. The best part of the chapter when she ask Harry to lived with her and her family,what shock me is that Harry would called the Dursley's family. Let look at it Harry been abusedby the Dursley for seven years, the life that Harry lives would make him grow up faster for the simple fact that he would anything he can not to tick off the Dursleys. I t nice that they start writing to each other, it nice thatshe would tell Harry about her family. It sad that Ginny see first hand what the Dudley and his gang is liked, it nice that Harry want to protect her. I like that they tell each other that they love each other, I am surprise at the age of the two people. It sad that Harry get a really bad beating, it great that Harry some how made where Ginny is at. Would the Weasley's have apparition wards in their house, that a alarm would go off if someone apparitied in their home, you just don't wany just anyone in your home. It nice that Ginny is going hide Harry and Nurse him back to health. In my humble optiont this is a great chapter. I am sorry if this is two long of review. I know this is my second review of the same chapter. I just did not like the first one and I thought I could have done better.

Musings of Apathy replied:

Nothing wrong with a long review.   It warms an author's heart.

Thank you.

Terry Swain posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 9:36am

Great start. looking forward to more. :)

EricThorsen posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 8:17am

Interesting turn to this idea... It will be fun to see how you work out the marriage idea and other aspects from the original idea, if you decide to go that route. Keep up the good work.

Lady_Gallatea_Ravenclaw posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 7:51am

Awesome fanfic! I love this so much- great characterization and use of language. I really like how the plot moves logically and everything is precise.

I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 7:22am

I liked it very much and sincerely look forward to reading more!

shalgal posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 7:03am

Very awesome story! I can't wait for the next installment.

Ashley Drury posted a comment on Wednesday 15th November 2006 5:59am

Hi there,

I like it. Well written, good grammer and above all else an interesting story. Please keep it up.

Thanks.