Family Inseparable

tess posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 10:33pm

love the story i can't wait for the next chapter

Tanydwr posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 10:03pm

Sweet story. I can't wait to read more.
I look forward to the Weasleys' reactions, and Dumbledore - will he turn up, after discovering that Harry isn't at 'home'? How will he react to the Dursleys' abuse? I know the Weasleys will be horrified, uanble to understand how anyone can do that to a child, and wishing they had listened to Ginny's pleas.
I can't wait to see Ron's reaction. I think he'd like a friend, since he doesn't really have one (which is probably the reason for 'adopting' the dog). Harry could easily be both Ginny and Ron's friend.
Keep up the excellent work.
Lol, Tanydwr

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 10:02pm

Ah, the tension, I can't stand it.
Good work so far. Keep 'em comming.

lockethegoon posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 9:47pm

Really good story, but now you've created a problem, I now must wait for another story to be finished, hitting refresh on my computer until it works.
Constructive criticism, watch your grammar sometimes you used past and future tense in the same sentence.

Sean Dillon posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 9:36pm

Awww. How sweet.

clayton day posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 9:31pm

Oh yes a great start. I can't wait until Mrs. Weasley finds out the stuffed dragon has been replaced by a boy. Let alone the reaction of Mr. Weasley when he realizes his only daughter spent the night in bed with "A BOY". You've bitten off a difficult chunk of a story and I wish you all the best. Rest assured I will be reading this and awaiting updates with zero patience.

Chrispy posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 9:29pm

Interesting.

Tammy posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 9:20pm

Very good! Update son!

Honor posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 9:03pm

Wow, I really like this. In it's own way, its actually a better set-up than Luna's Hubby had, although that one worked because it was Luna involved. Really enjoyed this chapter. More please! =^_^=

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 8:41pm

Now this one sounds right promising, with the chance of Harry getting out from his "relatives" and near Ginny rather earlier than in canon. I can see lots of possibilities here.

Bravo!!

happyreader posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 8:18pm

That was fun,,,, cant wait to see what comes next.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 7:52pm

Poor Harry! Nice beginning though. My only, very minor, criticism is that Harry's letter used some words that I think not even 11-year-old Harry knew. Otherwise excellent story. More please. I really like the idea of this.

Riven posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 7:36pm

interesting, i look foward to seeing where this is going, please update soon

Alex Mcpherson posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 7:32pm

reading that... my heart hurts. not literally but, well you know when you get a sinking feeling? that.
I just can't read bits of stories about bullies. the younger the age and the more the bullies can get away with, and the worse the acts they do, the worse the feeling.
I can read basicly descriptive horror stories where the story is not for kids due to say, description of rape, and then the gory battle scenes and when a character is shunned (as young as 15) for no good reason without getting all worked up,

I guess thats because I was a victim of bullying, so know the feeling quite well.I literally don't have friends although, unlike with Harry, instead of it because everyone was afraid to be my friend, it was because no one liked me at all. Anyone who did, I kept at arms length anyway.people online know me better then people who have known me all my life.
it gutrenders me, these stories, since they are realistic in the descriptions of children.
Children can be kind. but for every kind child, there is a cruel child.for every spoiled brat, there is a overwhelmingly deserving of that spoiling, yet completely hated, child.

Kail Ceannai posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 7:14pm

Fabulous. You've captured the world of a child quite well!

Ron posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 6:19pm

Hmmm, how is this going to go? IF Dumb ol Dork is actually monitoring Harry, he'd have to know that Harry apparated out, and would have to check up on him, hopefully, even before the Turdleys know Harry is gone. I'd like to see more of this one.

Brad1 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th November 2006 6:06pm

wow i love the story i hope the dursleys end up in jail for a long time for murder! please say someone calls the police to investigate! keep up the awesome writing!

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