By Musings of Apathy
Reviews
bertie69 posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 11:44pm
I'm glad to see you're back!! I was wondering when this would be updated but I understand how life can interfere and how hard it can be if you run into writer's block. Great chapter! I am looking forward to the next one, whenever that comes out, to see how Harry and Ginny go about answering Charlie's letter.
I know you don't need ideas, but it would seem since her grandmother seems to be on their side she would volunteer to say she gave Ginny the money, but I'll let you deal with that part of the story.
It will also be interesting to see how much Dumbledore will interfere, or at least try to, and how the goblins will defer him with their own tactics. It always bothered me, in canon, that he was so much in control of Harry's life. I never understood how he was able to place him with who he wanted and how he was able to control his life without any inteferance from anyone but I guess since he was DUMBLEDORE nobody bothered to say anything.
Well, great job on this chapter and I hope the next one doesn't take as long but I'll be sure to wait how ever long it takes!
Brad1 posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 10:53pm
wow and another fantastic chapter and the goblins just love to get one over on a manipulitive old coot! keep up the awesome writing!
texasranger_10 posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 10:30pm
oh bloody hell your good. i love the way you are writing this. keep up the good work.
Milarqui posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 8:24pm
Ooohhh, it's so CUTE! I wonder if Dumbledore will ever hear that Harry is now living at the Burrow! I bet that he loses some hair when Harry tells him that he is married! :D:D Please, update soon!
Professor_Chris posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 6:41pm
Excellent Update, I am glad that Molly didn't see Harry, however it looks like they are soon going to need to reveal the truth otherwise things are going to get bad. Hopefully Grandmum can convince them it is time.
busted posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 6:06pm
I was very happy to see that this story was updated.
I also wonder where you are looking to take this. I would like to see what would happen with harry found and how things settle after. Question is whether he just gets to stay or is taken away and has to find his way back. You can then have some overview of his life after that point until he is ready to go to school. It would be great if because Harry and Ginny are married they get to stay together in hogwarts or atleast attend the same year if you go that far.
I for one would love to see what happens with the couple through the hogwarts years.
Patches posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 5:31pm
Oh My! How in the world did Molly fail to see Harry? It must be Magic! That was really amazing. Dumbledore is really stupid if he thinks Harry still needs to be with the Durseley's. I don't think he knows how close they came to killing Harry. It doesn't sound like he explored that part of Harry's treatment by his "relatives"! Now Harry and Ginny are faced with Charlie's question of "where did Ginny get all this gold"! Hopefully Grandmum Prewett will have some good advice for Ginny and Harry. I love this story and I look forward to more! Thanks for writing. pms
Rick D Gale posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 1:46pm
Another great chapter!
I can understand what it's like to have a writers block. Just know that this is something you are doing for your own pleasuer - that we just happen to benefit from.
You have done a great job on the story, and will look forward to any new chapter you publish in the future.
rdgale
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 1:41pm
I hope your writer's block stays away now. :-)
It was a bit mean to suggest that we'd be getting the denouement fireworks and then back out. Although it does raise the question: what is your intended scope for this story? All the way through the end of Voldemort? Just until Harry's discovered?
Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.
vettesr posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 1:10pm
Another Good Chapter. I am curious how long Harry can stay hidden however.
Wolfric posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 12:48pm
I'm sorry to hear about the writer's block, is Cracked Reservoir any less blocked? I enjoyed the chapter; seeing the goblins make sport of Dumbledore is fun. I'd think the next chapter of Family Inseperable would include some snarky Snape comments. I wonder if Harry's galaxy will deflect post owls? Thanks for writing. W.
jilumasam posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 12:09pm
Good to see the story back up and running.
My those two are making a fine mess of things....still it will be fun to see how it all turns out.
:)
Kortir posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 11:55am
Aww. If nothing else, Harry and Ginny are always adorably cute. Nice way to do all this, and there's never been a day that I didn't enjoy watching old Albus run around desperately looking for a charge who can't be found. Hah. Quite nicely done, good luck getting out of the writers block- for having writers block, it's a very good chapter indeed!
IceBlades posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 11:32am
Well this was certainly an interesting chapter. I'm glad to see a new chapter from this story. It;s been a while in the making I guess.
Great chapter!
Happy Writing!
haphazard1 posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 11:27am
Thanks for the new chapter -- each part of this story has been a real treat.
One bullet dodged (Molly finding them in the forest), a new threat emerges (Charlie and the money). Eventually they are going to be found out, but seeing just how long it takes should be fun.
And Dumbledore begins to realize things aren't as he intended. Hmmmm.
PhantomPhoenix posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 10:51am
Yay! You finally updated! I found this ff a few days after your previous update, and was waitng rather impatiently for the next one, and am so glad I found it the day it got updated! *claps*
Ok, I'm done, now you can get onto other's reviews, bye.
Yeah noticed the misspells after I submitted, so here you go again, I can't stand having bad grammar in my own writing, anyone elses; as long as I can understand what they write don't care, mine; drives me up the wall and back down the other side.
PhantomPhoenix posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 10:46am
Yay! You finally updated! I found this ff a few day after your previous update, and was waitng rather impaciently for the next one, and an so glad I found it the day it got updated! *claps*
Ok, I'm done, now you can get onto other's reviews, bye.
riegert8 posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 10:36am
I am really surprise that Molly did not find out that Harry is living at the Burrow, or that her Daughter is married to the boy who lived. It must been a shock to Dumbledore that he find out that Harry is missing, I did think he was scum bag for using Legilimens on a muggle or better yet a defenseless women. After finding out how bad the Dursley treated Harry since he drop him on their door step and he is trying make a deal for Harry to return to house that hates him, this prove to me that Dumbledore don't care for Harry as a person but just as a weapon that he could use and get rid of. I am looking forward that Dumbledore is taken down a peg or two, this is a great chapter
Musings of Apathy replied:
Thank you. I wasn't looking to make Dumbledore so bad or anything, but he does what he thinks is necessary. He might believe that he can still arrange for Harry to have a good life at the Dursleys through such bribery. After all, they would not want to lose a full scholarship to university for their son, would they?
Thank you for your interest in my story. If you want to discuss this further, feel free to visit my forum, which has a Family Inseparable thread. I'll be paying attention and would love to discuss it.
Mike (MoA)
Deborahsu posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 10:23am
An update! Hurray!!!!!
Mikee posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 11:53pm